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BradyBunch


You are going to LOVE ME!

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This story is a sequel to Sweet Nightmares


As a spy for Celestia, you are tasked with a mission to retrieve information regarding the commanding officer of the invading Storm King, Tempest Shadow. But you were captured, and, all alone with only her, Tempest begins her interrogation. What she discovers from you might finally calm the tempest in her head and lift a shadow from her heart.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

This is a new way of writing?

I like it!

A very fun a cozy read!!

:rainbowkiss:

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There are plenty of other stories like this, if you like it!

Daaaaw poor wittle Tempest. She needs some love.............

Another great installment! I had no idea how you could possibly pull off a Tempest ASMR-fic, but lo and behold, I found myself pleasantly surprised. Well done again, Brady!

Although, one minor thing I'd like to point out, and I kind of feel a little weird drawing attention to it. This line right here:

I can handle myself around a bound prisoner.

And yet the reader is able to give her a hug a little ways down the line. So either she untied him/her, or the power of cuddles defies all logic.

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The power of cuddles is indeed strong, but when Tempest commanded him to leave the first time, she unbound him. It'd be hard to leave with your hands tied, and she did technically free him, so...

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it! This was a bit of a challenge to me as well. Post-or-pre-reformed Tempest? What situation? What relation am I to Tempest? How would she respond to affection?

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Yeah, honestly, I assumed you were gonna go for post-reformed Tempest. I thought that was the only way it could really work, but...I guess I was wrong. And given the end results, I have no problem with that. :)

Great job ?do another tempest shadow story in the future

Lots of hugs in this story.

Hey… now that I think about it, the Elements of Harmony are the purest forms of magic. And they're essentially the representations of… guh, friendship. But if the Storm King wants absolute magic so badly but hates friendship, he's rejecting power. He's… following a paradox!

When the villian's motivation is so flawed that a moment of contemplation results in them using "Talk No Jutsu" on themself.

Genuinely laughed because of that. The dialogue was enjoyable the whole way through for various reasons. Thank you for this.

Okay, I adore this! Tempest slowly melting to the human is something I never knew I needed. I’m not sure if you have or plan to write a sequel to this story, but if not, could I get permission to write one? I’d love to detail my own version of the “second capturing” of this “spy”. Hehehe

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