I was too merciful on Twilight the last time, https://www.fimfiction.net/story/411596/marks-for-effort-twilights-reprimanding let's turn it up a bit.
After Twilight bans the CMC from her School of Friendship, after accusing them of a crime they didn't commit, the girls give her a big taste of the cold-shoulder, and this leads to major falling out with not just Twilight, the girls, and friends, but it starts to give her a bad image all over Ponyville, which could soon escalate into worse!
Chapters (4)
What happened last time?
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/411596/marks-for-effort-twilights-reprimanding
I think that's supposed to say "Twilight Sparkle was very angry with the Cutie Mark Crusaders."
EDIT: Why all the dislikes? Don't get me wrong, I hate what Mykan's doing, but I hate stories with a grammatical error in literally their first sentence even more.
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Thanks... fixed
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Glad to help!
EDIT: Why all the dislikes? Don't get me wrong, I hate what Mykan's doing, but I hate stories with a grammatical error in literally their first sentence even more.
So what this has to do with the humane 7 in this story?
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My error... fixed it... thanks
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Your welcome.
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It still peeves me they don't change the term "Main 6" to "Main Cast/7" (Since Starlight joined)
Hey. New story huh?
Your enjoying this aren't you?
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It's been a rough busy season (Still not done working yet) so Yugioh E-Quest is still on hold, and I have been ITCHING to kick some of the these characters in their miserable hides!
So, just a quick one...
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We Anti-Bronies love it when Twilight and/or her friends suffer.
And like I said "Paybacks are sweet!"
That doesn’t make any sense... Honestly, there isn’t any payback needed in this situation, it’s just stupid. I’m pretty sure Twilight did what any responsible adult would have done and punished three kids
i'm offended by this story. Its just a simple mistake and everypony is overreacting to it
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I'm glad you're offended!
the girls are being punished, For something they didn't do, and Twilight violated every Friendship Concept she's ever known by jumping the gun... and even still... I don't like her, so
*Cocks gun*
"Make your peace with God, TWIT-LIGHT!"
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Ha! You were obviously a person who was forgiven for their mistakes far too easily, but there were those of us (Myself included) who were scorned, beaten, and punished for not just the pettiest things, but for things we didn't even do...
...It's payback time!
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I'm an Anti-Brony...
Fish gotta fly... bird gotta swim... or, whichever way you think is right (Just being funny)
Seriously: Let me finish the fic... THEN you can judge, it might explain how things are happening
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Wow... your such a heartless person... i have no words but to say that
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Number 1: There is nothing better to do...
And 2:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site
While i like the idea of Twilight realizing her mistake, her friends need to take some blame too. They weren't clear with the CMC either when they said no. Besides, if Starlight said that Twilight and the others knew they would be good tutors, why didn't they tell them that?
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Simple... we haven't reached that part yet
No offense, but I do wish people would WAIT until the fic unravels before judging
This is obviously a bad dream.
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You called it, though I really wish it was real...
Still torture is torture, and Twilight's learned that it's not healthy to go to bed with a guilty conscience. Your mistakes can come back to haunt you.
While I myself am having difficulties understanding why an anti-brony would contribute to the fandom (as well as wondering what you call a fanfiction if the author isn't a fan), the people who downvote out of spite are just being petty. The story itself is alright, not that different from several fics I've read by writers who are fans.
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they're just being petty again. They don't like people who don't act hostile with me, give me nice comments, like my stuff, or try to help me.
Heck, one of their biggest hypocrisies is just now when I THANKED you for helping me with the spelling.
And while you may "Hate what [I'm] doing" I thank you for not being hostile and rude about it... UNLIKE MANY OTHERS
Please tell me it's almost over.
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Last chapter... being posted now
Good story if a little harsh at the start.
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Well, no offense, but this IS an accusation fic (Characters are here to be punished and tortured) it's supposed to be harsh
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So what's up?
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That bitch who's spamming me still can't get it through his teeny weeny, striped bikni head. He's not the boss of me, he has no right to tell ME how to go about MY ways, and his ideas are shit.
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Just know I'm here for you man.
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I just wish I knew who this shit was, cuz I tell you... he's got a BIG BAD thing coming his way for how he's behaved, and acting like he owns the site
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I could believe that.
Why is this so disliked? It’s not that bad.
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People are being petty and rude (Bullying me) for writing things the way I WRITE them, and how I think DIFFERENTLY than they do. (I post just one chapter of any new fic and it gets 20-30 downvotes, just like that)
They also downvote and mock anyone who genuinely likes my stuff and are not being hostile towards me. (Your comment will be downvoted too... just watch)
See... downvoted for the stupidest reasons.
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No doubt it’s the same people doing it every time. Most of the comments on here have exactly 6 downvotes
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you should see earlier posts, they have over ten...
I would tell rd, aj, and rarity to calm they a** down.
I feel like this is what happens when you tell your friends to keep a secret, but there’s that one loud mouth in the group.
With the way the mane 6 is acting I would honestly be glad that they are getting taken down with me.
I feel like after this I would talked to Luna.
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I generally like realism in stories Twilight Sparkle fucked up big your stories are good don't pay attention to people who hate on you just because they can't write a better story and they can't accept that someone has a different opinion that's not the same or in line with what they're thinking good stories should be celebrated not hated
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Thank you
Matthew 6:15
But if you do not forgive others their trespasses, neither will your Father forgive your trespasses.
Dude I know it's hard to forgive I've had to forgive in life but if you don't forgive and you hold onto anger that angar rots your soul from the inside to the outside believe me it's not good to hold onto anger or to not forgive plus by not forgiving that person you make them more important but by forgiving them you tell them they're not important anymore also by not forgiving you give more power to that person since you're constantly thinking about them and focusing your anger
Grudges will only hurt the heart, and will only lead to trouble.