Shunned, yelled at, isolated, reputations ruined the CMC leave behind everything that they've lost thanks to that dreaded newspaper gossip column Gabby Gums. A whole year has passed since they've ran away from everyone they once called family and friends, and now the entire town including the main 6 are clouded with guilt over their harsh treatment towards the three girls and not hearing them out first. But when an old threat returns with a vengeance. The main 6 find themselves and their town of ponyville face to face with not only an upcoming takeover but by some familiar faces that they've long been searching for.
A standalone remake of Dictator's of Ponyville
with permission by the original creator : https://www.fimfiction.net/user/382498/Dragon-In-Black
Where can I read the original story?
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sadly the original was deleted from the artist page
Huuummm This is interesting
I'm liking this. Keep it up. Though I wished their was a way to find the original & it's sequel.
I like it. Keep it up.
Can you guess that it might be up to 30-40 chapters long?
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I'd say the story will be either 10 to 15 chapters long depending on the scenarios I have planned out. I actually planned a little pattern where i'd release 2- 3 chapters a month depending on my work schedule.
I wouldn't say 30 to 40 chapters I do not have the patience to make a story that long I'd have to split it into multiple parts
How can the six greatest heroes in equestria not find three fillies? Are they not able to track them?
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Well, let's see:
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So you’re saying that she’s the reason they can’t find them?
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I'm theorizing that she's the reason.
Amazing first chapter, I will be following this with rapt attention.
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Any idea whatever happened to your original "Dictators Of Ponyville" series?
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Will Luna be in this story?
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Oh ok
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Maybe😏
I'm curious, who's going to star in the next chapter?
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There's not gonna be a star until later on, but you will see a cameo soon not gonna spoil anything 😉
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With all that's happened, Luna undoubtedly had been involved in finding the CMC's as much as sister & everyone else. Do you think she's been attempting to find them in the dream realm?
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Thanks. I actually meant who will be focused on in the next chapter.
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I took it down because i did not like what I had done to it and have decided to remake it. But that'll take some time, hence why I gave ALoneWolf permission.
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When you do get to finish remaking it, I can't wait to see how it turns out.
Now this is gonna be worse for Applejack, as if it wasn't bad enough what she did with Applebloom and Now with Granny Smith ? if i were her i would run away like Applebloom, full of guilt in the heart
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That's a good theory, however it would have made the story end way too soon if Luna used her dream powers to locate them
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Oh ok not gonna say whats gonna happen on chapter 3 but it will mainly focus on the apple siblings
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Good point. Have the princesses come in later.
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Works for me.
Ponyville, any of Granny Smith's words & wisdoms should come back into play to give you both courage & strength, for you're about to be in for a rude awaking when YOU KNOW WHO comes back. Believe me does she have a SURPRISE for you that you'll have to SEE-TO-BELIEVE.
Firstly, HOW do you know it was three? Chrysalis didn't specifically say how many, just "some ponies". And secondly, you can't be this stupid?! It would be obvious on who they are, when Chrysalis says she made a deal with three certain revenge filled ponies in the wilderness.
P.S. What does Thomas and the stories of Sodor got to do with this?
Anyway, after reading this chapter. The Mane Six, and Ponyville as a whole, shouldn't be this optimistic. Considering on who is gonna turn them over to Chrysalis.
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The apology scene with Dash , Blossomforth, and Thunderlane was inspired by peter sams apology to duncan from the Stories of sodor episode Revelations.
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Oh yeah I probably should have said "And who might those ponies be?" Cause looking back at it I should have realized that twilight doesn't know how many ponies helped Chrysalis
edit: just fixed it
Yeah I would relate to applejack because I got yelled by my mom at over a lie that my aide told her. It was that I threw a chair at a teacher but I didn’t even do that. But my mom did realized that she was wrong when my teacher did say that I didn’t do that. I was at diary queen and I reacted a little too well because I did use honesty but I didn’t blame her for yelling at me because well my aide lied but hey she stole my stuff and got arrested on fraud charges. I lived in Somerset but I remember it! However Granny Smith was too harsh because she overworked the apple siblings to the point where AJ snaps! Rarity’s parents handled it well because Rarity wanted them to hit her but instead of hitting her they hugged her. Maybe Rarity will apologize to Sweetie Belle! However Applejack probably accidentally murders Granny Smith but I don’t blame her. However Applejack could have handled it better but if Granny Smith does live I think maybe she should apologize and forgive the apple siblings and talk about how there could be better ways to handle stuff like this.
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I think I remember that it is a Thomas the Tank Engine YouTube Fan series.
Anyway, I doubt that the Princesses and Shining Armor will just sit in the sidelines. And just let Ponyville be taken like that.
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I'm sorry to hear that man. My mom can be pretty strict and usually jumps to conclusions herself. But i'm glad she realized that you didn't do it
"if Granny Smith does live I think maybe she should apologize and forgive the apple siblings and talk about how there could be better ways to handle stuff like this."
Ya haven't read ch 3 yet didn't ya?
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That is correct
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I'm actually Engines of Sodor fan. By Thomas1Edward2Henry3.
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It's a pretty good series
Ponyville better contact the princesses & S.A.. But even with them, not certain if they'll be able to get through to the CMC'S. Do you think the CMC'S may decide to go after them instead if they decide to intervene? For most times the best way to defeat heroes is to come at them through what's or better yet WHO'S important to them. Though keep in mind that's mainly up to Chrysalis since she's the brains of the operation.
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You'll see later on man, I don't wanna spoil the story 😉
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& to me & others, that only makes the story itself better each time out.
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I just remember, this was taken before Discord was reformed yes? Undoubtedly he'd say: "You know your highnesses, since the townsfolk & your HEROES brought all this on themselves, maybe you should let them clean this mess up alone. If you'd put yourselves in the CMC'S place, you'd feel the same as them for wanting to get back at those who turned their backs on & abandoned you in your time of need when you needed them the most. Not to mention, you don't know what's like to have others whether the same age or not shun you each time out just because you're different than the rest or being around others too busy to spend time together & always believing they know everything just because their older than you but in reality they don't. Walk a mile in their hooves, then maybe by then you'll have a better understanding".
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It's one thing to take revenge against a town. But going against your OWN leaders, captain of the royal guard, and your own government itself. Is pure stupid on the CMC's part. They are still kids.
Plus, at least the Princesses and Shining didn't shun them like Ponyville did. Then again, they DIDN'T do anything to stop it either, or find them hard enough.
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Personally, Luna will be most convinced. Due to certain circumstances.
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1. True to that good sir, but at this point in the story anything can happen.
2. Exactly my point. You might say Chrysalis could give that incentive to the CMC'S to go after them later. But then again we don't know what exactly she has in mind so for now only time will tell.
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Very true once again, but undoubtedly the others would convince her to help out in the end anyway. For if they refuse, it will only make them just as wrong & no better than the townsfolk. In addition, at this time folks have yet to accept Luna as an equal ruler like her sister or someone capable of protecting others when needed. If their wasn't a better opportunity for her to prove herself & worth to her people, this could be it.
Honestly, I’m on applejack’s side on this. It’s one thing to be mad about someone’s actions, but to constantly remind them of it when it’s not even necessary is another. I honestly would have acted the same way a long time ago and the fact that granny smith has been doing this for a year and applejack was holding it in doesn’t help either.
Technically, it wasn’t a lie and it’s not like they could talk.