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rarityxspike


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After Spike learns how Rarity feels, he is angry, upset and feels used. Spike feels like he can't fully open up to anyone about what happened. After having a dream where he spoke to Princess Luna, he ends up going to Canterlot to see her, as he remembered that Luna has helped him in the past. He needed to talk to someone and get it off his chest. After speaking with Luna and spending a few days in Canterlot with Luna, Spike starts to see the Princess of the night in a different light. Does this mean that he is over Rarity? Is this connection a strong friendship or something more?

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This could be very interesting for sure. We saw in the canon the impact Spike has had on her life and that she feels his absence alot when he isn't in it. I think that is something THIS Rarity needs to see. I am someone who personally likes Sparity but can understand how it doesn't always work. But I think the complex issues of feeling and relationships could be played with here. How DOES Rarity really feel about Spike? We all KNOW he isn't a child even with his size. We also know that Spike had a life BEFORE coming to Ponyville. So him going back to visit is more than just Luna. But he has a whole different group of friends there that we could see him hang out with. It could be a question of is it time for him to start to live for himself and NOT just Twilight and her friends.

So far it looks interesting, I'll keep an eye on this one. :yay:

This is interesting sure but I think Rarity should be treated like shit the whole story. Lets be far she mad a VERY bad mistake.... So has all the girls at some point. Being upset at the start make sense but I think Twilight shouldn't hate her or hold it against her forever. Now I am not saying it shouldn't cause some issue for her and Spike's relationship going forward I just mean as her friend Twilight and the girls should see that even if the way she did it was foolish she was trying to do something good

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Thank you for the feedback, it is very much appreciated. Don't worry, that is the plan. Rarity isn't going to be hated throughout the whole story.

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Yeah, sorry, I have just been ill recently, so I haven't had the energy, then when I was better I had to catch up with everything.

Thank you for your patience, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

When you start thinking about it with how powerful twilight is she could easily make or use a spell like that

Ah I was hoping she would turn in to fire twilight like she did before in the show

Really glad this fic is still continuing there.

Wonder what else we will see of Spike and Luna together there? :0

I’m sorry, but that is the worst excuse to lead someone on.

“I look like I've been thrown into a dumpster, brush all the trash off of me and walked three miles to get home!”. Rarity took a deep breath and thought about what she had been doing all night.

Well, that’s specific.

Ohh. So they were in a relationship?

Well, at least they talked it out.

Spike, if you’re gonna play dumb at least be good at it.

I feel like sooner or later they’re gonna get caught.

"Okay, well, Princess Luna visited me in my dream, and we remembered how we used to talk all the time, so I thought I'd go and catch up with her", Rarity couldn't understand why Spike didn't want anypony to know the real reason, but she respected his wishes.

Didn’t he just talk to luna?

Rarity is getting friend zone and is not seeing it. KARMA

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Crush or not if she didn't feel anything beyond friendship for him she should have had a talk with him. It would been hard but letting him believe that he had a chance was wrong.

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The show has had stupid ideas before but this takes the cake. I can't imagine how she got the idea giving spike a taste of what he always wanted would be a good idea.

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But that was in a dream… it would be better in many ways to visit an reconnect face to face. It would feel more genuine (and other such words)

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No. I mean, why is he lying when all he did was talk to luna?

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Ohh… yah that doesn't really make sense lol

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Plus there is very little known about dragons beyond they glow when the dragon lord summons them and they breathe fire and eat jewels. He could be close to adulthood by dragon standards plus he pretty grown up for his age. He certainly not worse than twilight on being mature

só para você saber que seu publico vem até o brasil, vou deixar escrito em português.


just so you know that your audience comes to Brazil, I'll leave it written in Portuguese.

"Oh, right, okay, you ready?", Spike nodded and got on Twilight's back, then they made their way to Canterlot.

Why would she fly there?

"It's been so long since we've spent time together like we used to"

"Yeah, but after Celestia told me I was going to be Twilight's assistant, I kinda got busy too busy to spend time with you", Spike started to feel a bit upset remembering the past. Luna lifted Spike's head with her hoof.

Did they used to hang out before spike became twilight’s assistant?

Comment posted by rarityxspike deleted Jul 4th, 2021

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1. Only because it's faster

2. In my story, yes :twilightsmile:

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So she didn’t go to the moon?

We all need a luna in our lives.

I wished I was in Spike's place. Me & many others.

"I remember one night, I was feeling jealous of my sister, everyone would appreciate the sun she rose and just sleep and ignore the beautiful night while I raised the moon, I just felt like keeping the moon up, just so other ponies would appreciate my night as they did my sister's day", Luna shuddered thinking back and remembering how she felt that night. "But that was also the night you told me how beautiful it was, and it made me feel so much better and having just one dragon appreciate my night was enough", Spike smiled at the fact he was able to help Luna that night.

Is there going to be a flashback explaining that?

I look forward to continuing :)

This is getting very lovely now.

Spike feels like he can't fully open up to anyone about what happened.

Really? Even Twilight?

Isn’t luna like his aunt?

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I think she can be, but that make her legal :moustache:

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So wouldn’t that be incest?

I'm sure many folks would love to be in Spike's place right now. The honor/privilege to snuggle next to the big heart in Luna's big blue furriness is about as close as to receiving a kiss form her.

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