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pretty hot eh
funny just yesterday i found that picture shino is one of my favorite artists. time to read^^
uh oh that ending. make another sequel from there ? :D
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Clops, we know it's foalcon, so let's get to it.
Oh My Celestia! That title is great!
Whats this? Apojet from clops? Sign me in for the best oc pair in fimfiction. Also F.
Looks like Mr. Stream is gonna get detention for making a mess in the classroom. It'll involve rulers and spankings. Apogee will also have to stay after school for remedial ... classes. She's lacking some sex ed credits. It just so happens the teacher can fit both of them in. Next chapter...lol.
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Thanks!
I love your Jet and Apogee fics.
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Thank you!
Teenager = 13 - 19y
Now those are human years.
Horse years are (roughly) times 3.5
So she is at its worst! 46!
ps. 10million years older? Jesus, so everypony is legal drinking age by the time they are born!! Oo
No wonder AJ's Cider always sells out! ANYONE can buy it... literally! D:
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Technically the moment the sperm touches the egg in my fantasy world, that creature is basically older than the pyramids in earth years.
There's a typo
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All of a sudden Celestia's 1.200 something years... they do not look as impressive anymore :/
--like being the 'firstborn' by minutes (and even that's relatively a bigger gap!)
Anyhow, Berry's daughter will glad to hear the news!
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5 thousand year old dragon queen < 10,000 year old pony teen.
Ahah, comment deleted. That means I’m first now!
Edit: for the chapter anyways.
So freaking hot
Always a treat to spy a new Apogee fic on the featured list!
More a nitpick than anything else, but what's the significance of calling her an XXX-year old? It feels a little clunky when reading.
God, I love Apojet; and you, the one who started it all
(and single-handedly made incest arousing for me), are still the best at it! The only complaint I could have for this piece is the ending: 'awkward getting caught' scenes are a bit of a mood killer for me, but that's just me. But regardless, you hit it out of the ballpark with this new addition, and I can't wait for more!Questions (if you'll allow them):
-If this took place months after 'Any Landing', then she's at most 17, so... is the ambiguous age angle really necessary?
-I swear, it seem's like Jet's jet gets bigger every story. Is it possible that frequent use of Zesper has other effects?
-Will we ever get another Kindnicker(/Tower Shield) story at some point in the future?
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Great questions!
Ambiguous age is really helpful for some people if they want to enjoy the fic but don't like the age aspect, those changes are for them.
I love the idea that zesper maybe has long term enlargement effects, that absolutely may be an idea I borrow!
I really like Kindknicker! I have no plans to do anything with her right now, but I may very well so something in the future.
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Thanks!
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Fixed it. Thanks for the catch, sollace!
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Fixed, thanks!
(There's a typo in your name by the way)
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Why not both. Jpg
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This guy is an asshole. I like him!
I really don't like the XXX-Year old. It is like a fist to the face of readers.
You could just not mention it. Sometimes it is best to just omit details.
Anyone else noticing the down votes on every single comment?
9833815 Yea not sure what's going on with that. I think some stupid keyboard warrior is making the rounds
hittingslapping any and every slightly foalcon related fic on fimfic.Regardless, this was another excellent and welcome addition to the Equestrian Areo universe (or whatever the name is).
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Fuck
brand*
for*
Hmm that is a bit ugly... I think that making the pun on the “Gathering” part would make more sense... but I really don’t know how...
of not being
Let's see how many dislikes this comment can get!
Starting from Day 1, Hour 0.
Umm Day 2, 3 likes? Thats is not what I asked for...
Day 3...
FINALLY SOMEONE LISTENED TO THE INSTRUCTIONS
WHOEVER DISLIKED GETS THEMSELVES A GIANT COOKIE
Day I don't fricken know and the like to dislike ratio is SO OFF
I have not been counting the days, and like to dislike ratio is 9:1...
Srsly
Day *making up a random number*
20:5 wow
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Thanks guys!
Now that was a pretty enjoyable read with a good ending.
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Fuck you, you get 7 likes and you're gonna LIKE IT!
bet
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Fuck... Jet Stream should really help repopulate Equestria with his river creating spunk. He sure has what it takes
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What? She's obviously 30. Just, we have no idea how old that is in Equestria.
I dunno if that "Sh" is supposed to be there...
ALSO HOT OWO
I decided to come here next to see what one of your shorter stories looks like.
Misspelling. It should say "No buts".
You're covered in fur! You're already colorful! Ah, whatever. It's clop, I need to just roll with it.
Nice name!
For Christsake, she has freckles on her ears! That's like cheating, isn't it? There's no way she's going without dick.
Yes, this is a *cough* problem when your Dad doesn't want to fuck your brains out. We can't have that!
I'd be supremely annoyed having to wash lipstick off my cock every time my girl gave me a blowie. For those bronies out there into bimbos specifically, this brings far more appeal, I'm sure.
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You're shameless!
This is a strange addition. It breaks the fourth wall, provides me with no new information, and just leaves me scratching my head about why this character is even a teenager if this fact isn't going to be used to titillate. Is foalcon considered loli in your local area? Is this an effort to limit the number of people downvoting your story reflexively? Is Chris Hanson pointing a gun at you? Was this bit intended to be humorous? I really can't fathom why you added this!
Most people assume the Mane Six to be in their late teens, early twenties as it is. Apogee is portrayed as being between the ages of 12-15 in your works in terms of how mature she is and I'm leaning heavily towards the 12, especially with how Jet talks to her and the fact she doesn't have her own pocket money to spend on things. In the United States anyway, reliance on an allowance puts you below the age of 16 and wanting to spend money on a... (squints) boop-a-roop doesn't sound very High School. She looks like a foal, acts like a foal and by any metric applied to observable reality is a foal, albeit one who's developed past puberty.
I think the rule applies here that if you don't feel comfortable writing about a particular thing - say, Apogee's age - then don't write about it!
Moving on...
An excellent description and a legit use of a colon. Very nice!
She's 13-years old; stop being guilty about it!
I'm serious, it makes me feel really uncomfortable that Apogee's age is coming off as a problem for you. You've deliberately written her size, stature, and maturity level down at every occasion. You can come up with a fill-in-the-gaps age for the reader all you want but this is foalcon. Just accept what you've written and stop feeling bad about it! You don't need to apologize or feel guilty over fanfiction!
That's so cute!
Make-up.
I was going to say... Well that's a cute little way to tease the old man. I do like their interactions; it's very endearing.
Incorrect spacing.
Heh! Am I reading a Firesight story now?
Don't mind me; I always tease him when he uses ellipses at the end of paragraphs as a way to tease the reader on.
You gotta watch out for those Maregolian hordes and their leader Genghis Clop.
Oh shit! You stuck me good with that line!
Now you're putting some points on the board! And this scenario with them inside the school makes this double UNF-tastic. Keep up the good work!
Another hit! USS Aficianado is listing to starboard now. 45-degree tilt!
I agree narrator; it was.
Add a hyphon between ZESPER enhanced.
And he stuck that in her ass OMG!!
Yes, I'm still reacting to Apogee's Play Date. Christ Almighty on a fucking matzoh cracker that has to hurt!
Turret #2 is knocked out. Keep going!
Outstanding detail! We really do have many of the same priorities! Shame, I didn't find your work sooner. We could have been teaming up for years on stuff...
Not sexy but pretty funny!
Now, this is doing it for me! You've earned the upvote, my friend.
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If next chapter doesn't send me to the bottom, it will be the biggest letdown in fimfiction history.
Another hit! I'm putting on the life preserver... You still need to add a comma after instinctively though.
All three paragraphs are a hit. USS Aficionado is 80% on fire and turning over on her side.
The forward magazine exploded annnnd I'm sunk at 500 fathoms. You win! Adding to favorites.
A swimming pegasus! That's got to be hard to manage to swim underwater with those hollow bones they've got.
Add a comma, you perv!
Also, no more slimy! Slimy = bad!
Gossamer, this man said! Nice!
I don't want your 'Sh'! Delete it!
I don't care if it's ellipses or whatever just put something there at the end! I'M LOSING WOOD DAMMIT!
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This simile is... FUCKING TERRIBLE and yet it actually works!
I don't have anything else to say. I think I'll go now... Find someplace to pass the fuck out.
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I'm glad someone else said it before me.