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Just those two mistakes on this chapter I saw. Other than that Oof! Reading the next chapter.
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Thanks Tank!
Just fixed 'em!
Congrats for keeping with the Apogee/Space Ponyo stories for so long, dude. That's some dedication right there, good work!
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Thank you! It's been a blast!
Well now, can't wait to see how this affects Diz's confidence as well as her relationship with apogee! Could be nice seeing more of Diz in these stories.
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Do you think she'll be able to turn it into an attempted confession? I feel like Diz will always tell herself she's happy enough being Gee's best friend and won't make a push to try to be anything more.
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Maybe, but with that crushing "love her like a sister" remark, she might just stick with best friends with benefits out of fear of ruining things. I would love to see Diz come out of her shell a bit more and slowly lead up to that kind of confession but I feel like the best chance of that happening would be in a snap of tension in the heat of a moment.
There are other ways, of course. Maybe she starts hanging around more and getting into more threesomes or other activities until jet catches on and encourages the more healthy relationship between her and apogee than himself with apogee. Of course, there is always the excuse of "no one gives dick like daddy does" to keep him involved but I feel like that relationship is just one big train wreck waiting to happen. Incestuous relationships, especially with minors, almost never end well, even if they don't get dragged off to jail.
Which brings me to my increasing worry about how much I actually enjoy these fics. They wouldn't tempt me personally to do something stupid in real life but I tend to get concerned when there is a lack of concrete consequences for foalcon/incest/rape fics (not to imply it's really much of a rape fic but minors are known for being particularly reckless and in need of guidance and protection against manipulation at times). Reinforcing positive stereotypes about those actions can tell a potential preditor what they want to hear to encourage them to try and go through with it instead of seeking help.
Loved it, a humorous and steamy as hell. I hope we get to see more of Diz, she's so adorable. Great work as usual.
It’s boner time.
It's official. Apogee is now Cadence's designated heir-to-the-throne.
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Yeah, that sounds about right!
Don't worry about the foalcon bits... In my fic-verse Equestria is at the bottom of a deep gravity well in its local solar system, so everypony ages much slower than us.
Relative to you, Diz and Apogee are over 24,000 years old!
Isn't fiction grand?
For real though... Of COURSE it's detestable and disgusting in reality. The consequences are real, horrible and devestating. Anyone who would think to harm a child IRL should be flayed alive... and even consenting adults participating in incest usually end up with terrible consequences as they damage important social fabrics for themselves and their loved ones.
But this is fantasy. The same way I don't anticipate that an action movie encourages murder, or a heavy metal song encourages human sacrifice.
If people have trouble separating reality and fiction, there's much more than just something on a website that will tilt them over.
If anyone is reading this, and worried that your fantasies could become real... Get help now! Speak to a counselor ASAP! Reality IS NOT fantasy!
Apogee is going to break Jet, at this rate.
It's not even Father's Day and now this!? Between you and ArmadilloEater I'm like:
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I can't wait until we Trixie it up on Sunday!
I'm saving armadillo's fic until then. Gonna need LOTS of fluids
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Lol in that case, ponies mature very slowly! Humor aside, I believe anything can be the catalyst, fictional stories included. That doesn't mean there aren't ways to safely enjoy it, I just normally try to voice my concern to raise awareness of what can happen. The people who don't need it might just ignore or down vote me for fear of me being pro censorship, but I'm more for reminders simply being included in subtle, less noticable ways in the content (acknowledgement of risks, realistic repercussions, ect... which your stories typically do a decent job of showing) and more overt ways beside the content calling for open discussion and assistance for people with urges to attempt dangerous sexual relationships in a safe setting.
This crazy lucky/unlucky stallion!
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No escape from reality.
Hot. Great job. The sequel to this story is going to be very interesting with the cute creampied young mare!
P.S. You may want to go back and prof read the story again. I count at least 10 type-o's.
xxx: Was what?
yyy: Than the rest!
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Erotic - 10
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Plot - 6
grammar/Punctuation - 7
flow - 10
Total Score
39/50
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Needs a sequel
So, what're the odds we get a non-canon continuation where it ends up that not pulling out ends badly?
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You absolutely rock! Thank you!!!
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Haha glad someone picked up on this!
Probably low? That would be a very very dramatic fic. Don't know it I have that in me at the moment!
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But that would mean that their subjective experience would be slowed down to, by the same amount as their biological aging.
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Oh well, maybe some day.
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Yes, the stories are sent out via an FTL system so you get them real time.
Magic.
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Should have gone with the ancient stories explanation. A long long time ago on a planet of horse furries...
This series of stories continues to be *extremely* hot. Thanks my man, and please keep writing about Jet wrangling these two.
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My pleasure!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Missing something.
You should be flogged for that reference, you magnificent bastard. I couldn't stop laughing
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Hahaha I'm glad someone picked up on it!
That was quite hot, but I'm once again more interested in the situation and aftermath of this whole night. Is Dizzy going to get more involved in these Tuesdays, or is she here only the very rare occasions that her heat becomes unbearable? I can only imagine how awkward things are with Jet and Diz now whenever she comes to visit Apogee. It's not exactly a one night stand you can exactly forget about and pretend that it never happened.
Sad it ended just before the best part.
slaps hoof on dock
"This filly can fit in so much cock."
Wait, “Jer”?
oOf on that error.
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no comment will ever surpass this genius!
filly
fur
pore
sopping
Then
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Thanks! Great catches!
Oh my. Getting serious now. They shared ess!
*less
Missed a thing.
Jet has a brother!? I'd like to meet this Jer'.
Scion? Spawn? Scorn?
Sorry, mate. No amount of thinking about work will get you out of this one.
*filly
*missing a closing italics. I do it all the time.
*fur
*beast
*gaze
*the
*boners
*of
*ruining
I think you have a few too many 'not's here.
*sticky
I know you have a rule about editing these, but could you please fix the typos? This is unusual for you.
Totally worth it.
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Thanks my friend! Have cleaned up most of these.
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No problem! I'm glad to hear.
If you ask me, I will also remove them from my comments, so as not to clutter up the place.
Great fic. Would've loved a bit more with Diz after she woke up. I'm wondering if Jet got her pregnant with that little slip up.
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After what happened that's not the only things that need to be cleaned up
Damn... What a teasing... She most be wet enough by this point to squirt a river
Magnificent chapter
'nd' to 'and'
Kina expected Luna to sneez at this 1000 year joke.
Amazing as ever. Rutting her into a mindblowing orgasm.
Just good ponys are magic... Dont think he could have penetrated her
Sooo... Do Jet Stream has his herd now?