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  • MJet Gets Dizzy
    After the series of sexy Tuesday night events, the naughty Apogee puts her devious plot to hook-up her dad and best friend into motion! Will Apogee be able to use innuendo, Twister, and sexy movies to get the studly Jet and the mousy Diz to connect?
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Comments ( 45 )

Wow. Apogee sure has advanced her seduction tactics over the course of a few weeks. She's already trying to pull her dad into a three-way.

Also, I hope you're happy with your choices, here. Because you've probably just created demand for a new clopfic set in the scene immediately after this. (I know I sure want to see it. :pinkiecrazy: )

Keep up the good work, Cloppy.

That's really just one reason why metric measurement is more pr-

Metric system >> imperial units

Thanks!

Definitely there's a lot of fun Apogee/JS stuff I want to do once I'm through with the initial weekend (2 maybe three chapters remain).

I'm in a bit of a clopwar with bigmac115 right now which is bringing these comment-fics out.

The casualties will be massive.

I can't wait.

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As a Canuck, I agree.

There are still a few things that I still use imperial for anyway.

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will there be a second chapter?

I love this entire ApoJet series. Definitely need to see more from Any Landing, and need to see directly after this! Great, great work!

Damn, your on a roll with these

the idea of them having a special day of the week and turning lewds into a regular thing is so sweet
and of course apogee would tell their secret to her friend and invite her in lol
awesome work once again, i'm loving these short fics and can't wait for the next chapter of the main one too

WOOOHOOO!! Another teenage wiafu story!!!!:rainbowkiss:

This entire apogee clop-off is the best thing to happen to my clopfolder in awhile

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Exactly!

'Tuesday nights' was probably the only thing Jet could come up with to keep it from being 'every night of a day that ends in 'y''...

The rest of the week he gets to be her somewhat reliable (though frequently absent) Dad.

Diz getting into the mix is just our naturally mischievous ponyo taking a huge risk. They are besties though! Everything should turn out alright, Right?

tune in to find out, I ain't spoiling nothin

Ok. I m loving this. More soon please!!

Damn, you're churning those lewds out like it's nothing!
I gotta admit, I was a little skeptical about Jet's and Apogee's lewd-ness turning into a regular thing, but I'm liking it so far. Why fight it when it's so much easier to just indulge and enjoy? :pinkiecrazy:
But yeah, good work once again. Funny how you've essentially created your own alternate (and lewd) universe with these stories from Shino's original. I sure am curious to see where this will be going.

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Yeah you've nailed it. I'm definitely just a kid in a playground right now, and leaving things so that Shino has full authority over the actual main canon.

The little side charas that have popped up have been tons of fun to write, and make a little suite of friends for the Aerospace family!:rainbowkiss:

Light hearted clop is my game, yo!

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and you are on top of it.

No horse-ing around when it comes to these stories. They're top of the Notch. Thanks
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once again i am taken aback by how good of a writer you are u are quickly becoming my most favorite artist as of late you show real potential and i will gladly support these fics as best i can keep up the good work man and high praise from me you earned it.

Do you really need to make every small stand-alone chapter be it's own story page? Why didn't you just make a side-story compilation instead? Maybe even put them into the main story as omakes.
I feel like at this rate, you're Apogee series is going to have fifteen installments, with thirteen of them being 2000 words or less snippets.

I think it should be called more of a side story than a sequel, I mean the other one isn't even completed yet.

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Yeah, you're not incorrect they are just side stories.

Originally I was just leaving them on DB if the stories were less than, say, 2000 words.

Then I got a ton of PMs from fans who wanted to keep them all on fimfic in their Apogee folders, so I started posting here.

You may have the best solution which is a side story compilation fic, with each chapter being one of these side stories.

I'll gauge the feel and see if that's what I should go for... As I've said all these side stories are kind of fun offshoots from pictures. The main fic continues unabated. I just edited over 4500 words today!

Wow. Between this in the feature box, and every other Apogee story of yours in the popular section, I am honestly astounded that you don't have significantly more followers.

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It's all part of a conspiracy led by burly historical writers... wait a minute... it was YOU

Seriously, though I'm sure the followers will come (or go) depending on how I maintain (or degrade) the quality of my work.

In the meantime the followers I do have are pretty awesome. They draw crazy good Apogee pics that force me to write more and more smut.

I like the idea of having a single Apogee compilation/compendium fic where all of your short side stories about Apogee all have their own chapters. Might make things a tad easier for you, too.

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Yeah I'm starting to lean that way too... Couple of things I'd want to figure out / know first:

1. I'd need a bitchin' cover art. And a sick name for the compendium. I don't want something I regret the next day... (Already i look at this story title and I'm like... What was I thinking? Was I drunk?)

2. Can you rejigger chapters? Like if I do chapter 1 then chapter 2 then I write a chapter 3 but chronologically it comes before chapter 2 can I switch things around?

If not I might need to come up with some way to tell time in the ficverse... Like 3 weeks AAL (after any landing), or something that I put t the start of the story... Reason being is that as artwork comes out I'll probably shotgun stories all over the place in terms of chronology.

3. It seems as if updated fics get less of a 'push' from the site than new fics. This is the least important of the three, but it's nice to get as many fans exposed to the 'verse as possible!

Apogee is not holding back anymore, is she? Especially if she's bringing her best friend (I wonder how things will turn out with her brother if she's open to this). Another satisfying sexy quick story. It's extremely cute and sweet that Jet Stream does his very best to at least have a special day with her despite how stressful and hectic his job is, even if it does everything to prevent him from having that spare time. Maybe it's just me, but I'm more interested in process of the romance and them becoming lovers and all the hurdles they have to go through to hide it all throughout that time. I find it all strangely sweet. The lewds are a huge bonus though.

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Fair enough concerns. I'm not an author, myself, so I wouldn't know. Sadly.

I might be able to think of a good title, though.

This series is fuel for the bad taboo... This is gonna be bad. In a good way.

So many fics now. Stop. Too Many. :heart:

That was fun! Also, this has beem asked, but is this a one-shot, or will there be more chapters? :pinkiehappy:

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One shot!

There's a high probability it continues though... I'm still trying to figure out how best to organise the one shots

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What you need, my friend, is something to reduce your boner level before consuming more Apogee.

I suggest watching the following to confuse your boner.

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Its funny, cause i know the guy who made this. Fear not, i can still fap to this.

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Crap... Maybe something from Viv will be out of your CLOP range?

BEHOLD THE ORIGINAL APOGEE:

I'm sorry jealous you know a creator of random pony YouTube vids, they're like crack cocaine to me.

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lmao, he and i dont talk anymore sadly. we were good friends for a while tho. And yay! Space Pone! Again a thing i can fap to. I think you might have met your match here.
Have some Crack on me.

More Apogee please. You have a great series here. We need more

I'd love to see how this continues.~

Hot damn. Where's the sequel to THAT short but sweet goodness?!:moustache:

Really? Who ditches dinner on the appetizers?

Follow up on these two stories, I beg of you. They're too good to just leave hanging.

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I refuse to use the imperial system on principle. Metric all the way. :twilightsmile:

Magnificent teaser for a fun time

I wasn't able to sit through the 70k word fic that precedes this one but what the hell. I'll read it anyway. And because this is copied from derpibooru or wherever, I suppose editing suggestions are a waste of time.

"Buhh... ubble. Bubble bath. We're allowed to bubble bath because there's enough hot water." Jet Stream stammered, realising he had almost spilled the beans to a third pony.

With all the tech these ponies have, I'm surprised there isn't more hot water available to someone so wealthy. (Yeah, it was an excuse, what could he do?)

Jet Stream arched an eyebrow. "Oh I never talk dirty? Is that so you naughty little girl?" He reached one of his hooves out to stroke his daughter's back through her school sweater. Her wings twitched a little and began to extend slightly.

"Oh dad, what?" he brought his hoof down over his daughter's rump, continuing his massage through her gray school skirt. "You're such a horny little filly, aren't you Apogee? Hiking your dress up like this?" Jet Stream leaned in toward her grinning face with a horny smile on his features. "You might as well be wearing nothing at all..."

Mphf! I dunno why but these two paragraphs really got to me. Please, Cloppy, FFS - do dirty talk more often! :rainbowwild:

teenage-cunny

That... actually sounds pretty classy. I know it's cunt but it's classier! It's cunt wearing a monocle and a top hat. Hello, my baby... Hello, my darlin'...

sexy, cute schoo stockings.

I think you meant school but this is still hot. You're edging on this being a favorite story.

"Mmm..." Jet Stream leaned in, licking the tender flesh of his daughter's upper leg, just above the school stocking where the elastic of the sock made the skin plump and ripe. "You horny little girl... tell me you want it."

Apogee was blushing in embarassment and ecstacy - she didn't even notice that the door was partway cracked open, not that it would have stopped her from whispering, breathily. "I-I... w-want it..."

"YEP! No problem I'll go get some pizza right now, here I go!"

Of course he had to go and order pizza.

Apogee groaned... "No lectures Diz, not now." Her groan turned to a wicked, mischievious smile. "So here's the plan for when he gets back..."

I want MORE! Dammit, why did this end?

Take my like and favorite!

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