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Clopficsinthecomments


I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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>*Sees cover*
Huh, the new Mortal Kombat DLC character looks pretty neat.

If you keep this simple advice in mind, your dreams can never hurt you.

"SANITY IS FOR THE WEAK!"

9440091
pfft, she cant join Mortal Combat. She isnt a mortal.

Don't worry about your sexy dreams, they're all completely normal for a filly of your age. However, all of your dreams so far end with either going to jail or death. Let's focus on that for now.

It's there something you wish you had done in the past which you regret?

9440488
Yes! Not only are you the first to try that commenting style, you also picked up on a big sub-theme!

Well, that escalated quickly.

Can't say that it wasn't Hot though.

>Plasteel

Dune, WH40K, or Transcendence reference?

9440746
Rimworld actually! Though I am a big fan of those other series as well!

Wait, what happened to the Apogee's Instinct Blue form?!

9440804
hehe, I changed the pic to her waking up... that super power is still on db though https://derpibooru.org/1949787

9440809
Ok, just between us, every time I saw her image in the Blue form, all I could hear in my head was her powering up yells!

a series of dream sequences that would make Sigmund Freud question his sanity

This is the single greatest line I've ever read in a story's description

Tell me, Ms. Apogee. What do you think the cake and whipped cream can represent? How did it feel knowing you'd be filled with them to your hearts content?

9441200
Apogee: "Hmmmmm.... I like whipped cream, I guess... So yummy?"

*THWAP*[b/].

You got a misplaced bold close

shot her hands up

hands? [Ok it's a dream....]

9441100
And SOMEbody just demonstrated the Freudian slip!

just whywas her dad here, anyway?

why was

Apogee’s blush went to a bright red as the din of confused teenagers trying to understand just what was about to happen.

Uh... as the din did what?

putting her short hooves up on the edge

short?

was the one to be taking in the most

taking her

entrance. He tight

Her

Apogee squired at her mother’s kissing

squirmed

He could that she was cumming from the way her pussy

missing verb

she made her way past her crew-quarters and over to the science lab.

Hmm it's not a really sensible design to have the crew quarter between the labs and the airlock to outdoor... It means that whatever you bring in from outside needs to pass through the crew quarter risking contamination and further distance. [Ok it's a dream and that may be a sign of that]

She grasped daisy with one of her

Daisy

the cum to apogee before tensing

Apogee

her fucking as hot as

was as

God is dead, and we have killed him, and this story and all of the others like it were the knife we plunged into his beating heart

Ah, the things I miss when I forget to check my feed...

This is going on my soon to be read and faved list.

Ok, so the entire time I was reading this I had the same confused expression on my face and "What in the hell is this?" question in my mind, but I couldn't stop.

Now, I'm no psychologist, but that won't prevent me from pretending to be one at least a little.

The dreams all seem to have the themes of family and death. In all of them, Apogee ends up imagining herself dying. In four of them, she explicitly considers the possibility of being impregnated, with one that could leave it as a possibility, and of the two remaining, even if not pregnant, one does have her in a situation where she has a life inside her (even if it is her dad as a miniature pegasus).

Perhaps this all is a manifestation of her desire for a family, and fear that it will not work out due to what happened between her own parents.

9442404
Sir, you have transcended my writing.

I intended to show apogee's fears of the relationship and taboos associated with it. But I see now our description is so much more apt. Apogee's fears the deeper relationship she yearns for because she saw how devestating it was to her parents.

Brilliant analysis.

This doesnt make me gay.... Does it?

9442540
Hm that's a first...
However as you don't seem to be one of the authors here I reserve the right to ignore your opinion.
I'll try and remember if I ever find myself reading any of your works.

His nickname is “AIDS?”

Well, given MY history with him being just a toxic asshole, kind of fitting.

This is the most 'DREAM' scene you can get. I love it.

“Oh don’t be silly honey, your mom and you have managed this size of cake many a time[times][?] now.” Jet chuckled, putting both of his big, strong hooves on the kitchen counter and staring mischievously across the surface at his daughter.

Man...If this is what she dreams of, what the hell kind of things are going on while she's awake?

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