Apogee has dreams. Strange dreams. Tag along as the cute little filly works her way through a bevy of sexual dreams that would make Freud throw up his hands in defeat!
Duelist 96... He's quite a big fan of yours! Well, a fan of yours is sure to have good taste at the very least but can he thrash like a Norse god? Let's find out!
Apogee opened her eyes. She’d been having the strangest dream. Re-entries, baked goods, her parents, the presents. None of it made any sense. All from taking a little nap in her mother’s trailer, out in her junkyard.
I'm not sure this follows logically. Does she have a history of having weird dreams while taking a nap at her mother's trailer? A simple fix would have been to change 'from' to 'after' if you were just trying to roll through a brief recap to set the scene.
“I’m glad that you came to me to sate your heat, Apogee,” Delta said, her alcoholic breath causing mixed emotions in the filly.
I too feel both revulsion and disgust whenever I think of Delta Vee — Equestria's Mother of the Year.
Apogee still couldn’t believe that her mother was the one to be taking in the most primal of ways
What?
She felt that she should have been disgusted by the idea of copulating with her mother, but when Delta had let her cock grow free, she couldn’t control herself further. After seeing that monster between her mother’s legs, Apogee had gone straight to the natural position of mounting and presented her needy sex. She had heard the shuffling of hooves behind her and prepared for her mother to mount her when she was pushed on her side. Apparently, Delta wanted her to see everything that was about to happen to her.
Telly, inelegent, feels like a CliffsNotes version of one of Cloppy's stories. I'm skipping the rest of this chapter together.
I feel bad but this just doesn't have anything going for it.
Well, that escalated quickly.
Can't say that it wasn't Hot though.
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Duelist did a great job with this one.
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Yeah they did!
taking her
Her
squirmed
Could have done without the ending chunk but otherwise my fetish.
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Not sure why you got down votes, all your edits were helpful and spot on, thanks!
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Duelist 96... He's quite a big fan of yours! Well, a fan of yours is sure to have good taste at the very least but can he thrash like a Norse god? Let's find out!
I'm not sure this follows logically. Does she have a history of having weird dreams while taking a nap at her mother's trailer? A simple fix would have been to change 'from' to 'after' if you were just trying to roll through a brief recap to set the scene.
I too feel both revulsion and disgust whenever I think of Delta Vee — Equestria's Mother of the Year.
What?
Telly, inelegent, feels like a CliffsNotes version of one of Cloppy's stories. I'm skipping the rest of this chapter together.
I feel bad but this just doesn't have anything going for it.
That ending reminded me of Sarah Connor's nightmares in Terminator 2: Judgement Day.