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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“And we're changing our ways, taking different roads./Then love, love will tear us apart again.” –Joy Division, ‘Love Will Tear Us Apart’

Twilight is making Spike start school, against the dragon's wishes, and sends him off with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. But noticing that Spike is down, Applebloom wants to cheer him up. Thus begins a number events that throw the young dragon and fillies into a journey of friendship, jealousy, love, adolescence, and self-discovery.


Image created by DespisedAndBeloved on deviantArt.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 73 )

I favorite this since it is interesting and I plan on reading it
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1086726 Well, I really hope you do. It was one of my favorites to write.

1086747:
well just from the description Im sure I'll enjoy it. :D

Excellent story. I loved it :ajsmug:

1086752 Well, when I was slowly uploading it on dA, I got some unique responses as readers had to wait and speculate of what I was doing. xD

i could picture RainbowDash or Luna spying on them with a :twilightblush: face or a :trollestia: face.

Aw, Sweetie is jealous. Ain't that cute :yay:

awww what a magical story.... i give it :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:/5

Well played Spike. Well played :moustache:

This is cute and well written (aside from a few mistakes) :pinkiehappy:

1087222 Yeah, I got mistakes from time to time. Definitely not perfect when it comes to my writing.

1087720 I'm not too sure bout that. However, I do have a lot more stories to upload here. Or if you don't want to wait, go ahead to my dA account.

Very nice story. You had me hooked after the first chapter. I enjoyed it.:twilightsmile:

Kinda wished that Scootaloo confessed her feelings towards Spike as well. But hey, 2 out of 3 was fine to me.:moustache:

Omg spike and apple bloom kissed:rainbowhuh:

When life gives you lemons, set the building on fire.

okay, know that was surprising:moustache:

Was I the only one hoping his date was gonna be Scootaloo? Still content with this though :scootangel:

1177667 Well, there is another one of my stories that is Spike and Scootaloo (with some liberties, mind you) that I wrote. It's called 'Combat Baby'.

1086958
You mean a :rainbowlaugh: face or ... wait a minute. Damn no Luna face :twilightangry2:

I have a feeling that Sweetie Bell likes Spike. If I am correct Poor sweetie :unsuresweetie:

My notions were correct!!(WTF is a notion?)

Scootaloo's reaction: *spits out muffin* What?! Y-you pick me?

AB and SB glare at Spike like Fluttershy would.:flutterrage:

Three words What...The...Fuck?:rainbowhuh:

Mother of celestia...:rainbowderp: :derpyderp1: :twilightoops:
Not sure if :moustache:+:unsuresweetie:, :moustache:+:scootangel:,or :moustache:+:applecry:...

1179171
What's your DA account name anyway?
And I also gotta say...

DAT STORY

1282388 My dA is the same as my username here.

Nice story - nice touch with the accidential kiss :twilightsmile:
Oh and Spike's first day in school and he's already kissing ponies - damn he's fast :moustache:

Hnnng! All this feels drive me crazy! It's so bittersweet seeing Scootaloo giving herself up for her friends. Exactly as heartbresking is seeing Sweetie Belle pining for Spike for so long and then seeing him fawn first over her sister and then over Applebloom. And having your heart broken twice (first because Spike has 'somewhat a relationship' with Sweetie Belle and then picking Scootaloo over her) rips Appleblooms heart apart too.
Spike would be a total bastard doing that to them - except he didn't start a single relationship. :facehoof: This is so confusing :raritydespair:

*sigh*
It's a really nice ending but I've gotta admit, with ALL of the CMC liking Spike I kind of liked the idea of all three 'sharing' him for a date.
Ah well, this story seemed nicely paced, the characters were portrayed as in the show and none of the fillies crushes seemed overdone. Although I would have liked more of a reason as to why Scootaloo liked Spike I can understand that this was not the focus of this story.

He choose Scootaloo? WHAT A TWIST!!!

Hope it's okay that I comment on something un related to this...
GABUTYRA!!!

Does she like spike... Or Applebloom?

Spike's a Pimp! :moustache:

One filly left! :scootangel:

.... Well that escalated quickly.

Like I said earlier, Spike's a Pimp! Just... Next time, don't destroy your own game Spike... That was risky.

Heh... Herd....

Ya know if he had to pick, I'd say he should pick Applebloom. They are dating after all.

Also Scootaloo is smart and not fawning over Rainbow Dash?! Didn't expect that.

Smart choice. Get them all but not having them? Spike's smart. :moustache:

Spike gave a small laugh, "Well, I think we all were surprised when Sweetie Belle admitted that she liked Snips after he asked her out for a date."

......... I hate this epilogue.....

3751575 You have no idea how much I laughed at this comment.

3751609
You did this to torment me. Story was great so far and when I started reading the epilogue:

Beginning: "nice! He going on a date! Hmm, one pony? Maybe one is meeting him and the others are waiting... Or maybe he picked Scootaloo?"

Finds out it's Applebloom: "oh, okay. Well I kinda figured it would be her. After all they did-"

Read part of Sweetie dating snips: "..................... DA FUCK?! Are you serious? No! Wrong! Wha... How...."

Finish reading rest: "....... Stupid Epilogue.... Ruined my interest... Stupid snips..."

I just have to ask: why?

3751639 Not going to lie, the epilogue was wanted by a LOT of people on dA and I more or less came up with it on the spot a few months after I finished the first nine chapters. I kinda just wrote what seemed to fit for the story.

If it makes you feel better, I have written a lot more when it comes to shippings and a lot more for you to read.

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