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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“Someday we'll know if love can move a mountain/Someday we'll know why the sky is blue/Someday we'll know why I wasn't meant for you.” –New Radicals, “Someday We’ll Know”

With Spike helping Rarity around her shop, the little dragon grows on the unicorn. However, does she share the feelings that he feels for her?

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Basic concept, but well done. I like it!

1098447 Sometimes, the most basic idea can be the best.

IT CAME FROM DA!

And it's still fantastic.

1098769 Yup, slowly transferring everything over here for more ponies to read.

1098778 please say that you have some with fluttermac or sweetiespike

1099766 Yes, I do. The stories, entitled 'Heart of Gold' and 'Plush' respectively, will be uploaded soon. I am uploading them in the order I originally wrote them.

Ah, this is great.

One thing Its Darling not Dahling:rainbowhuh:

1135509 I have it spelt that way because it is the way she speaks and how she says it. It's similar to what I do with the Apple family.

That was beautiful :heart::heart: my complements to you

It would make a lot more sense for Spike to be excited about Rarity's uncertainty. Means she's on the fence about how she feels about him, meaning he's got a chance with her.

I'm enjoying this greatly so far. It's simple and easygoing. There are a few errors that interrupted the flow, but other than that it's all good as far as I'm concerned. The biggest ones that stood out were "(They) was simply wonderful, wouldn't you say, dahling?" and "the brown early pony seated on her other side, lean on each other and continue watching" I'm sure it was just minor derps in the writing :derpytongue2: All in all, I'm pretty hooked.

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It could be that he thinks she did it out of pity.

1135509 good to know I wasn't the only one who noticed. She may be rarity BELLE but she is no southern BELLE (rimshot)

1308793 apperantly rarity is southern, who knew?

5511314 BRUH. I posted that comment 2 years ago

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