Mostly an artist but I write stuff sometimes
In an alternate universe, Empress Celestia is the sole ruler of Equestria - later to be surpassed by her daughters; her heirs. Princesses Sunset and Twilight had had a cozy life, until one day when their mother decided to reveal just how much truth an old pony's tale may hold - a tale that may be the beginning of a new one.
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I want to see more of this AU.
Any chance you develop it more?
Have to say that I DID enjoy the exchange and future story set-up in this one shot. Empress Celestia telling her daughters, Sunset and Twilight, this story herself as a way to teach them to expect the unexpected was actually a really good detail.
This was a amazing story
Perfect
this was a really good setup for a story, it would have been cool to see this as an actual multi-chapter story, but it was still good
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I'm planning on it :)
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Thank you! As an artist still learning the ropes to writing, it's super awesome to hear that I managed to get that out well enough ^^
Thanks so much!
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Thank you ;v; <3
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Aww thank you!
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Thanks! I'm actually interested to develop this universe more and hopefully I will keep getting the motivation and inspiration for it.
This feels like chapter 1 of a full story...Odd to see it as a oneshot.
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Haha yeah you've got a point there
This was actually me introducing the AU to my watchers on Deviantart, with the main plot thrown into the mix, and decided to post here once I deemed it good enough to share - that might just explain it.
I'm still planning on developing it more, so this won't be the last of it
Really enjoyed this though seems more like an opening chapter then a one shot
I would love if this was made into a fully fledged fanfic
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Will you ever continue the series?
Interesting concept and the artwork enhances that ideas here, but I felt the approach to the topic could of been different to land differently. Since Celestia banished her sister she could impart a lesson onto Sunset and Twilight about always being there for one another (which Celestia failed to do for Luna). Like their is so much more that could of been done with this topic especially with how Twilight and Sunset are parallels of Celestia and Luna in their perspective rights. But, it still doesn't take away from the quality or my enjoyment of the story.
Huh. Strange as it is, this is the FIRST story I've come across that has both 1) Sunset and Twilight as sisters, let alone Celestia's alicorn foals, and 2) is quite well written and engaging straight from the start!
I don't understand why you made this a one-shot story. Seems like a great opening scene/chapter for a full blown story. But if this is as far as this potential goldmine goes, that's a crying shame!
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I've always viewed them as sisters, even before this AU came to be. Idk it always made sense to me haha
I see you've found the other fic that will soon turn this AU into a multichapter story, so I hope that answers your desires <3
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Perhaps, but I stand by my statement that this should've been a part of the bigger story.
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It didn't work with the timeline I wanted to start the other fic with, and this scene was initially meant to take place a few years prior to the main story. (this was also written years ago, before the real story was fleshed out)
It will still happen, it just needs to be rewritten and will likely appear as a flashback of sorts