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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

Comments ( 13 )

That made me cry their love was so beautiful and I felt so bad for Lyra! :raritycry:

I can imagine Bon Bon putting herself in harm's way to save others and Lyra pining for her; they are such a devoted couple after all.
I wrote it as a tribute to their closeness and love for each other - glad it struck a chord with you.

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Good concept, but I'm not sure Twilight would let one of her oldest friends from school go that far down....

Regardless, well written overall!

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Thank you - glad you enjoyed it!

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Sounds like Lyra just let herself starve to death.

Very lovely story. tugs on the heartstrings :applecry:

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Grief can be cruel, especially when a couple have been as close as Lyra and Bon Bon.

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Oh, I wasn't saying it couldn't happen I was just saying that's what it sounded like since nothing was directly said about cause. I've known multiple people (not personally) who’ve done that.

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Thank you - they're such a loving couple that you knew losing Bon Bon would be bound to hurt Lyra badly.

That's very dark.

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I was trying to provide some catharsis for Lyra with the bittersweet ending, but you're right, it is a dark subject.

Well, that was an unexpected ending. I liked this story. Both as in I enjoyed it and also I clicked the thumbs uppy thingy.

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Thank you - very much appreciated.
Look forward to seeing you again soon!

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