How can a devoted partner come to terms with the loss of their soulmate?
For some it is harder than others.
Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork
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That made me cry their love was so beautiful and I felt so bad for Lyra!
I can imagine Bon Bon putting herself in harm's way to save others and Lyra pining for her; they are such a devoted couple after all.
I wrote it as a tribute to their closeness and love for each other - glad it struck a chord with you.
Good concept, but I'm not sure Twilight would let one of her oldest friends from school go that far down....
Regardless, well written overall!
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed it!
Sounds like Lyra just let herself starve to death.
Very lovely story. tugs on the heartstrings
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Grief can be cruel, especially when a couple have been as close as Lyra and Bon Bon.
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Oh, I wasn't saying it couldn't happen I was just saying that's what it sounded like since nothing was directly said about cause. I've known multiple people (not personally) who’ve done that.
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Thank you - they're such a loving couple that you knew losing Bon Bon would be bound to hurt Lyra badly.
That's very dark.
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I was trying to provide some catharsis for Lyra with the bittersweet ending, but you're right, it is a dark subject.
Well, that was an unexpected ending. I liked this story. Both as in I enjoyed it and also I clicked the thumbs uppy thingy.
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Thank you - very much appreciated.
Look forward to seeing you again soon!