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I still wonder how in the fuck she can Sia.
okay, okay, goddamn, i'll read the thing, don't lynch me
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is it bad that this made me laugh?
This isn't so bad. Has a lot of potential. :D
You have a few grammar errors though.
Okay, having read it now, I can only wonder what's to happen next. Definitely earning a track and favourite
Minor mistakes here and again, sure, but that's not stopping me lmao.
gotta write a songbird story at some point...
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Edit: Yes, about fifty/fifty I'm kidding lol
I'm onboard. I'm digging it
Mares? What about him shipping with girl dragons, griffins, hippogriffs, single ladies, etc...
I applaud you Shipping Spike with these unexplored ships, its so much fun.
Yeah not going to lie but reading fics were Spike is only being shipped with only the mane six over and over again is getting kinda boring, so something like this is a breath of fresh air and I really wish we get more rare Spike ships, I do remember seeing quite a few of them a while back but now a days not so much.
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I just noticed that I couldn't find any with him and Songbird, so I made one, I can't wait to finish the story so I can find another ship that barely exists.
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Captain Celaeno is one. Grand total of 29 fics for her here on fimfic. And most of them are not good. Same with Queen Novo.
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I'll add them to the list
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There is also the fan creations that have traction but not alot of stories. Like Eris, 'Daughter Of'/genderbend of Discord and Button's mom. Or if you feel lucky, Daybreaker. Most of her stories on this site are abit rapey so something abit smoother could go far.
This story looks good so far, but there are a few grammar mistakes
THis is good.
Oh Spike, you have no idea the power you hold ...
In your pants.
Oh gawd...
That art is from BurgurKiss.... right?
I like it
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Probably
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Yay
Thought for a second those two are gonna made out on the stage.
Entire fic seems to be a run on sentence, and is hard to follow. It needs a bunch of work to fulfill it's potential, as the sentence structure and even basic spelling is just a little off. Maybe get an editor?
also
presision should be Precision
chrystal = crystal
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none of my editors stick around long, and I can't afford to pay for one to stay around.
Both words have been fixed thank you
Do yourself a favor and look up "run on sentence" on google.
Yeah, I love pairing the loveable guy with new mares, too! The only problem is HOW they get together in the first place, especially without cliches like "I saw him in the croud and it was love at first sight" or "she just happened to come to the castle/Spike just happened to run into her for no reason"...
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yeah, the beginning really makes or breaks the story.
I wanna see more of this, and stuff a unique pairing and one I can get behind.
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Well, I'll try to upload at least one chapter a day until the story is done.
I would love to see more unique pairings with Spike more often.
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I know its tough to keep an editor, and I don't mean to sound like an ass. This story has a lot of potential to be good and I'm just trying to help a bit, because lord knows I know it's hard to write.
It should be endless :v
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I think five chapters also can I suggest a One-Shot spiked and Pinkie Pie's mom or spoiled rich
Long
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I'll think on it.
need more !!!
*look down at the bottom of the page*
Didn’t expect a new chapter so soon but I am happy with what you’ve written; looking forward for more in later chapters.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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tomorrow.
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kk!!!
DAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNN!!!!!! A whole month?? Nice!!
Huh, I'm kind of surprised it doesn't automatically give a like to a story if you favorite it. I know that on Derpibooru if you favorite an image it automatically likes it as well.
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I wish fim would do that, I'd have a lot more likes on all my stories
Another rare Spike ship eh? Hope this one actually finishes, it's a shame that so many just kinda stop.
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Hey, are you calling me out on my spike x spirit fire story? Cause I'm gonna finish it once I think of a good ending.
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cool
Yes they are
There were some misspellings at 3rd chapter (shit instead of shirt lol) but not counting these, it is an enjoyable story, and a unique shirp. Ship. Whatever. :)
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No lo! I though I fixed all the shit shirts
Nice job
You really need to work on your editing, as run-on sentences abound. Also, your said tags need work. It's "How awesome is that?" he asked. Not "How awesome is that?" He asked. This Guide should help.