There were some misspellings at 3rd chapter (shit instead of shirt lol) but not counting these, it is an enjoyable story, and a unique shirp. Ship. Whatever. :)
"Oh really? Cause I asked a friend of mine, her name's Strawberry Blast, if anything was happening. She is Songbird Senada's Manager." Pinks severely butchered her name. Spike's ears drooped at being caught. "So how did she look in the bathing suit?" She asked with a smile.
Didn’t expect a new chapter so soon but I am happy with what you’ve written; looking forward for more in later chapters.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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tomorrow.
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kk!!!
DAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNN!!!!!! A whole month?? Nice!!
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cool
Yes they are
There were some misspellings at 3rd chapter (shit instead of shirt lol) but not counting these, it is an enjoyable story, and a unique shirp. Ship. Whatever. :)
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No lo! I though I fixed all the shit shirts
Nice job
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I have an editor looking over the chapters tomorrow, however, I shall take this guide link and try and implement it on the next chapter.
30 days, 31 days, or leap year?
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4 sets of 7 days.
so 28 days.
I’m not a Songbird fan, but this story is pretty cute, and only a touch rapey. I approve!
I find this actually pretty great... I can't wait for more
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Pretty much a month's worth of non-stop humping.
I think that's supposed to be Serenade...
Please note, excellent chapter name.
Worked perfectly
Shinning armor|SPIKE YOU SLY DRAKE GET IT LIL BRO GET IT HAHAH!!!
Spike | YOUR NOT HELPING DUDE!!!!!
Dusk shine| Don’t look at me Spike you’re on your own on this one.