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I am a loyal Brony and a proud citizen of Alabama. I love to write, and I love this show. My favorite pony, you ask? I am torn between Luna and Twilight. I'm looking forward to your comments!

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Celestia wants to show her mother that she wasn’t lying about dating a dragon, so she reaches out to the only dragon she knows she can trust, and Spike finds himself trapped in a lie that he believes is real.

What could possibly go wrong?

***Updated: 8-15-18***

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 35 )

You uh....might wanna bring up that rating

chanting 'Bump up the rating'

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Not referring to that. But the picture does make it look suggestive.

This is interesting for sure. I can't wait to see what kind of question's Celestia's mother will ask Spike about their relationship. It will be fun for Spike to learn more about Celestia as well, find out that she is far more like a everyday Pony than he ever knew. Or find out about her filly years as well as her awkward teenage years lol.

How is Twilight gonna react about him & Celestia's relationship.............................if she find out though? :rainbowderp:

I like this but at the same time, it feels rushed.

"Now, tell me more about this boyfriend of yours."

"Oh, we never told her, did we?" Spike paused, looking over to Celestia, silently praying that she follows the bit, "I mean, we've been meaning to tell you for a few months now... what was it? Six? Seven? But we never really found the right time, and things kept getting in the way, like the whole Tirek fiasco... PLUS, there's the fact that the public might not exactly take it the right way: that their eternal, all powerful ruler is dating not just a non-pony, a hideous beast that's been known throughout time and tale to eat fillies and colts as soon as they see them... So sorry if we kept it a bit too close to the vest to tell anyone."

A bit quick but interesting. Has the potential to be more, because this felt like a 2 chapter intro.
Good job!:moustache::trollestia:

How a about a complete sequel series where Spike and Celestia go on clandestine dates and adding some humor to it, each date ends up having them run into one of the Mane 6 and Luna spying on them. This is has serious potential.

This could be an amazing story. Have them go on a few dates and maybe have her parents start saying they want them to get married so Equestria can have a king or something

Celestia's mom feels like the type to say " You give me a grandchild or i make you a sibling."

to quote the great doctor himself: IT'S ALIVE!! IT'S ALIVE!!!

I will be honest here, I am not a fan of the turn this story is taking. I don't like both sisters throwing themselves at Spike. It felt so much more interesting and intimate when Celestia offered the second date and really their whole interaction. Now it just feel like all the romance of the story was cheapened by this chapter. I can see Luna coming there to find out more, for sure. But to than go and kiss him like that it really feel odd and like a forced way to up the tension and force the story along. I hope it finds a way to bounce back for me or idk

Sisters, man! Good luck Spike. This family is crazy!:moustache:

Very interesting... Wants more just to see what will happen next. GG

Discord would be like "Spike. Where were you?"

Spike: Dating Celestia

Discord: You.... Nice

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Sooooo judging by reading this I'm just gonna straight up assume that this is gonna be a celestia X spike X Luna fanfic right.........hmmmm I'm piqued with interest now.

OK, first Luna tells Spike her sister usually has higher standers then him, pretty much insulting him,
then she kisses him out of the blue, just leaving him confused and disgusted, I don't know if I'm supposed to be rooting for a sister but if I do Luna isn't winning herself any favours.

After this, can you do another Spike shipping story?

Oooo! This is getting juicy! :pinkiecrazy:

Well Spike, I don't recall Celestia saying to keep the relationship a secret!:pinkiehappy:

Get your date, and have fun!:moustache::trollestia:

This ought to be a interesting story.

You don't need a new line after every sentence. Paragraphs are your friend. Might just be an import error.

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I’m trying, trust me. College life takes up the vast majority of my time.

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