This story is a sequel to Pumpkin and Spike 2: At the Gala
Spike agrees to foal-sit Flurry Heart, Wacky time's follow suite, with a few misshapes down the road
Flurry Heart is around the age on the CMC in this story. Spike is a bit taller
This story takes place in the same universe as Pumpkin an Spike
Credit for this story even existing goes to OmniFox for giving me the idea
Cute. ๐
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thank you
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You're welcome, Flurry Heart is a great character. ๐
I wish I could have given her a bigger role in my story, and abit older like you did here. XD
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I felt like making her older would make the story writing easier
I did the same with Pumpkin Cake
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That makes sense. ๐
I kept her as a baby because her magical powers are very unstable and uncontrollable, which makes her a more dangerous, yet compelling character. Kinda like in the "A Flurry of Emotions" episode. ๐
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I can understand your reasoning, I just made her older because she and Spike are the only characters who will have a big part in this story, and writing a story where only one of your characters can talk is a little hard.
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Tell that to Big Mac, who doesn't like to speak XD
I know it's a different circumstances, since he's a lot older, and he and Spike are already friends, but you get what I mean. ๐
And yeah, I'm looking forward to your story unfolding with Flurry Heart and Spike. ๐
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thank you kindly.
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You're welcome. ๐ I enjoy stories like this. ^^
Is Spike and Pinkie Pie in a relationship?
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I have not yet decided
Imagine Flurry Heart having a Manticore for a pet.
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I'd be named Mr.Kittybug
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How about Stinger?
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sorry if that last comment was rude, I was sleepy and having a horrible week. my sincerest apologies
Please update.
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only if you say please
Please.
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alright ill start work on the next chapter
Thank you.
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your welcome
BAHAHAHAHAHA HILARIOUS!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Loving this story
9200056
Because you said Please, and Thank you, you get 2 chapters.
so if we say please with a cherry on top & thank you kindly, whats that get us???
hahaha thanks for the new chaps tho, fun little read tho im more sparity than spikexpinkie pie but thats just me lol
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that would get you the last chapter and another sequel lol
and it's cool, I respect other's and their ships, just trying out a new one.
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well I look forward to it :)
& yeah i like other ships aswell, i think its more i like spike you can do so much with him & i always love it when he comes off as bad ass/ smarter than others think lol
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Same!
Vengeance
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Vengeance!!
What vengeance?
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Against some random dude who made a story about them.
Yep, 4th story. Please & thank you
Normally the phrase "all at once" is used in conjecture with the rule of three.
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I added weird
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Do you need an editor?
Because I'm an Autistic Grammar Nazi, with nothing but time on my hooves.
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your hired (i don't pay)
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So do I give you my email in a PM and you send me the story and I send it back when I'm done?
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I'll send you a PM with a Google doc
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4th story
Sounds like me when my boss and teacher leave do everything except work ๐๐๐๐
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work is hard, and doing nothing is fun
I am with Luna distroy him!!!
Dam sensory spell and go get that lunitic auther spkie and Luna.
I wanna read about what they did to that author. It would be a nice bonus chapter.
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I'll think about it
Spike sets himself on fire to dry off. Well everybody has there on way but still.
I love Lunaโs ending, but technically when you think about it, youโre the author. Congratulations, you played yourself!