I shall Butcher your dreams
Years ago Nightmare Spike was exiled from Equestria for multiple reasons, after a decade 3 children of the Mane 6, the Cake twins, and Flurry heart discovers he has obtained several Magical items of vital importance to Equestria future and attempts to take them from him in the hopes of impressing their elders.
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I like it
9808509
nice to hear
*chuckles* nice (but damn if I hate Google translater)
Anime
Neat
What did Twilight and the gang did this time to Spike
9808960
It'll be explained soon (probably)
9808962
Take your time dude
An okay start, but it felt very rushed and not a great way to introduce us to the new characters, that we don't know who belongs to who.
9809028
Yeah...that's my bad
you are aware that Castillo de espiga means herringbone castle right? and i cant wait for the next chapter.
9809612
the only Spanish word I know is Castle, I just looked up a bunch of other Spanish words and picked one that I found fun to say.
9808509
it appears someone disagrees with you as they took the time to dislike both the story and your comment
Lol they disliked my comments
9809746
only yours and mine tho, I find it somewhat funny, to be honest
Very clever starting at the middle
9809964
I think the best part is not telling the readers it was the middle untile the 2nd chapter.
9809612
Herringbone kinda works though since 1st chapter is middle of story like a Red Herring if you will
9810067
herringbone is a style of brick laying but so far i don't see spike as a villain. more like someone forced into the role. like the main 6 got bored one day and forced all the darkness they ever defeated into spike just so that they had a villain to fight.
9810079
The more you know. Plus I was always kind of fond of medieval architecture and gothic style castles. Wonder how I missed this bit of info
9810305
well now a day herringbone is mostly from laying down tiles or wood flooring a certain way
9810487
I'm learning so much right now
Would it be better to be Faris, Prance instead?
9811654
why's that?
9812205
It looks like the first have been switch out
9812603
While that would be funny the intended joke was mixing Paris it Mare and replace France with the word Prance
Very clever flurry
Its diamond country yeehaw!!!
O yeah dis got pretty good bro, I mean, like, bro
Twilight needs a massive kick in the face or the pimp hand infuse with the power of god.
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oh just wait
Oh sweet Jesus that was funny
I think I speak for everyone when I say that Twilight just using her title just to make Spike do what she wants, and that she deserves to be hit in the face very hard for doing something so low to someone who's pretty much her brother.
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Well Twilight's a bitch and thus Far i love Spike💚
He's like the perfect combination of King Sombrero and Discord
Twilight needs to slap so hard because Spike isn't overreacted on what Rarity did to him
9983900
A slap? you are too forgiving a full force punch is more like what she deserves
9983945
I think a horn break will be just fine
9984018
Stone petrification is recently popular
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Holy crap... calm down... what she needs is a blast from 6 restored elements of harmony. Think about it.
Rarity was greedy? Twilight was unfriendly? We got ourselves a midnight sparkle and nightmare rarity me thinks...
I could be wrong now...
But I don't think so
Cause it's a jungle out there
Yeah it's a jungle out there.
9984948
I been cheated on it sucks it makes you feel like you didn't do enough and wondering what you could of done differently when it wasn't even my fault at all.
9985157
Well... that sucks. Words cannot express.... however I'm sorry but I'm not sure if that is what the story is focusing on. It put alot of emphasis on she kept the rings. why would she do that? She has to have plenty of money. She is one of if not the most sucessful fashonista.
9985157
As for the cheating thing. I've never had anyone, so I wouldn't know.
9985489
I'm not saying she doesn't regret it but that still doesn't change the fact that she was severely pregnant with another man's child
So... Rarity held out on Spike, cheated on him, got pregnant from another stallion, and then used the rings he bought for her whore ass wedding...
And Twilight not only has Discord on a damn leash, but also acted like Rarity cheating was no big deal and Spike was in the wrong for being angry!?...
Thus far, Both Twilight and Rarity are very unlikable and I'm hoping they atleast get the shit beat out of them
How is it they're even elements of harmony again?
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I really like this one. I hope you are able to add a few chapters for the next update. I want to see how it'll turn out. Especially now that Spike is OP
. At least that's what it seems like 
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Please Tell me Karma hits those betrayers hard!
Wow Rarity no matter where you in the universe are you massive B***h.
10081575
well most universes anyway
I kinda wanna beat up soarin and rarity
But that pinky jingle made smile so much