• Member Since 16th Oct, 2018
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WhalenJP


Don't mind me, just a man diagnosed with OCD, ADHD, ADD, Asperger's, And Autism looking to write some stories. It Is All Pure Imagination...

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This story is a sequel to Displaced: The Metal Armed Vigilante


The Metal Armed Hero's Adventure Continues!!!

After the events of the last story, Jon Whalen has taken in a woman by the name of Nightmare Moon, who is Princess Luna's alter ego from the other Equestria, banished by the Elements Of Harmony and freeing the Night Princess...

Jon is in a conundrum... Something is wrong... Why doesn't he feel good?

Will The Metal Armed Hero find out what's wrong with him?

Will Nightmare Moon feel something other than a thirst for vengeance?

Will the family stick together to help fix whatever's wrong with a weakening Jon?

Stay Tuned...

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 56 )

One successfully story and not one cross-over with other displaced? Congrats.

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Ditto, it's rare to see a Displaced story without crossovers and you made a good one.:yay:

Thank you for the positive reviews, I just feel a little bit proud of what I make with my own imagination. But I don't think it's that good to be honest, but I just try my best and write out what comes to mind. But thank you anyways! :twilightsmile:

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You are a troll when it comes to creating suspense.... I love it. :pinkiecrazy:

Not bad, waiting for the next update

The Author's Note slayed me.

Awsome, cant wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

in all honesty, it reminds me of when Tony Sark was suffering from palladium poisoning in Iron Man 2, based on the whole discoloured veins thing. So could it be something to do with whatever powers the actuators, but We also thought it could be some sort of magical virus that came through the portal with Nightmare Moon (or however she got through) and infected Jon when they first interacted.

I really like the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter :D

I must not squeal in joy. I must not squeal in joy. ...NYX! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :pinkiehappy:

9504765
Glad you liked that sudden tidbit of information.:pinkiehappy:

9505124
Well:applejackunsure: I will get to work on the next chapter, if you like?

The meeting of Nyx and Night(mare Moon), I wonder what will happen?

9511013
Now we time how long it takes for the universe to actually realise it has a paradox and to react violently!

9467426 YOU ARE SHOING EMOTION YOU MUST GO TO THE DALEK ASYLUM!!!!!!!!




P.S good to see another dalek on earth :ajsmug:

NYX?!?! DOES THIS MEAN THAT NIGHTMARE MOON TURN'D INTO A FILLY?





P.S who is Nyx?

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THERE ARE NO DALEK PRINCE'S, IF ANYTHING YOU SHOULD BE IN THE DALEK ASYLUM!!! I AM A NEW GENERATION OF DALEKS THAT WILL EGGSTERMINATE THOSE WHO OPPOSE THE DALEKS!!!

p.s. it's also cool to see another dalek on earth as well. Maybe we could be friends?

9672867 I AM FROM AN ALTERNET UNERVERS DALEK WHERE I AM THE EMPEROR OF THOSE DALEKS AND I GAVE MYSELF THE TITEL OF THE DALEK PRINCE AND DON'T YOU DARE SAY I SHOUD GO TO THE ASYLUM DALEKTRON911 OR YOU WILL BE EXTERMINATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::flutterrage:



P.S I wood like to be friends also sorry for saying you shoud go to the dalek Asylum:fluttercry:



P.P.S I will EXTERMINATE all who oppose the daleks as well and your casing is scary and cool at the same time buy the way:scootangel:

>>THEDALEKPRINCE
I DO DARE. THERE IS ONLY THE CREATOR WHO SHOULD BE CALLED A PRINCE, AND IN MY UNIVERSE I AM THE DESCENDANT OF THE CREATOR DAVROS HIMSELF, THUS MY NAME DALEKTRON911. I ALSO ARRESTED THE DOCTOR AND EXTERMINATED HIM ON THE SPOT. SO GO AHEAD AND TRY TO EGGSTERMINATE ME. I KILLED THE DOCTOR SO I DOUBT THAT YOU CAN.
:twilightangry2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::flutterrage:

ps: its alright I know you didn't mean it. also i to shall eggsterminate those who oppose us.

ps: thanks for saying how cool and scary my armor is. Its a remade scout armor.:pinkiehappy:

Hmm ya know what I like this a bit fast paced for my liking but overall not bad.
continue please.
I want to see what happens next!

9694723 THATS WIRD YOU KILLED THE DOCTOR IN YOUR DIMENSON TO? GRATE!!!!!!:pinkiehappy: WICH DOCTOR?:pinkiehappy: AND ALSO I'M A DESSENDEN'T OF THE FIRST EMPEROR DALEK!!!!!!!


P.S maybe we can make a alince with my daleks and yours?

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YES I KILLED THE TENTH FORM OF MY DIMENSIONS DOCTOR. IS THIS FIRST EMPEROR OUR CREATOR DAVROS?
p.s. this alliance you propose, I shall accept it, for all daleks across the dimensions.

9732517 YES I AM TALKING ABOUT DAVROS BUT I CALL HIM EMPEROR AND SO DO MY DALEKS :pinkiehappy: AND I AM HAPPY YOU ACCEPTED THIS ALLINCE DALEKTRON911 AND I SIAD THAT YOUR ARMOR IS COOL BECUSE IT IS:ajsmug:.

P.S i killed the 11th doctor by the way and BOY WAS HE ANNOYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2:

P.P.S IF YOUR WANDORING WY I AM WRITING WIRD THATS BECUSE WELL ALTANET DIMENSIONS WRITE WIRD TO YOU I GUSS AND DO YOU LIKE MY ARMOR?

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INTERESTING, IN MY DIMENSION WE DALEKS CALL HIM BY HIS FIRST NAME. I'VE HAVE SEEN THE 11TH DOCTOR IN A DIFFERENT DIMENSION BEFORE. HE SURE WAS ANNOYING, BUT THANKFULLY I WAS ABLE TO RETURN TO MY HOME DIMENSION. ALSO I BUILT A MACHINE THAT WOULD ALLOW ME TO CLEARLY COMMUNICATE ACROSS ALL DIMENSIONS. PERHAPS I CAN GIVE YOU THIS SO THAT WE MAY COMMUNICATE BETTER. ALSO YOUR ARMOR IS COOL AND IMPRESSIVE.

p.s. do you have discord then we could chat with each other more.

9734679 YES I DO HAVE DISCORD AND THANK YOU MY ARMOR IS A TIME WAR MODEL AND THE EMPEROR PAST AWAY BY THE HAND OF THE 11TH DOCTOR

P.S THE ONLY RESSON I DID EXTERMINATE THE DOC-TOR IS BECUSE HE KILLED THE EMPEROR

P.P.S YOU CALL THE EMPEROR BY HIS FIRST NAME RELLY? WOW THAT TAKES ALOT OF GUTS TO DO NO JOKE I ONLY SAY IT WHEN I GIVE EXPLANATION ON WHO I AM TALKING ABOUT

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I SYMPATHIZE FOR YOUR LOSS, BUT THANK DAVROS HIMSELF THAT YOU KILLED THE DOCTOR. AND YES EVERY DALEK IN MY DIMENSION CALLS THE CREATOR BY HIS FIRST NAME. NOT ONLY TO PRAISE HIM BUT ALSO HONOR HIM.

p.s. awesome that you have discord. Im doctorwho911#4106 on discord. can't wait to talk with you.

9735586 WE HAVE A PROBLEM................................ DISCORD IS SAYING YOU DO NOT EXIST BUT I KNOW YOU DO IT IS INFEREA AND MUST BE EXTERMINATED EXTERMINATE!!!!!!!! (fires laser at the computer)....................... OOO NOOOO!!!!! I DID IT AGAIN WHY MEEEE WHY WHY WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S I GOT A NEW COMPUTER DON'T WORRY :twilightblush:

9735586 WHY HAVE YOU NOT CONTAKED ME DALEKTRON911 FOR THREE WEEKS ANSERE OR BE EXTERMINATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I didn't get a friend request on discord so, that's why I haven't contacted you yet. sorry:pinkiesad2:

Perhaps nightmare seeks out tia or their Equestrian counterparts to ask about the weird feelings she has.
just a thought and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Awesome chapter. I hope our dear doctor octavious well be ok. Can't wait to read the next chapter:pinkiehappy:.

Ook from what I remember was a nasty scrach from Everfree. That was the known last injury.

What was affected. Poison? BLACK MAGIC POISON, ARCANE RAW MAGIC? WILD CHAOS MAGIC? OTHER?

Please update

Hmph. cute.
Great chapter man loved it.
Can't wait to read the next one.

9795009 HE IN AN INFERIOR LIFEFORM HE MUST BE EXTERMINATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next Chapter.

“ Hello there.”

"General Kenobi, You are a Bold one."
"Kill him."

9909988
Darlich you must be deleted deleted deleted

Please tell me this is going to be updated

DL2

“ What is love?”

Baby don't hurt me, Don't hurt me, No more.

Sorry... Couldn't resist. ^^

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