Brony-wan-kenobi
Joined 16th Nov, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Brony-wan-kenobi · 34k words · 242 21 · 4.3k views
- Brony-wan-kenobi · 13k words · 51 6 · 1.1k views
- Seraphem · 52k words · 103 13 · 2.4k views
- Cynewulf · 16k words · 101 20 · 1.8k views
- Wendy A Crescent · 6.1k words · 102 14 · 2.5k views
- Seraphem · 21k words · 96 17 · 3.5k views
- SPark · 14k words · 128 29 · 2.3k views
- Shrinky Frod · 8k words · 87 18 · 3.6k views
Featured In38
Clopfics11,027 stories ·15,530 members
- All Mature2,119 stories ·634 members
NSFW3,691 stories ·1,295 members
- Bat Ponies158 stories ·534 members
- The Pro-Clopfiction Group719 stories ·301 members
My Little Fetish14,959 stories ·8,328 members
Lightning Dust Is Best Pony484 stories ·535 members
Polyamory1,123 stories ·1,718 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.125 seconds
Total duration
879 users online
885,490 hits today, 1,504,386 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2023
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2023 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Awesome, great to see a new story from you.
It begins!!!
Ugh! Right in the feels!
This is an absolutely lovely start! I've said it before, but I can't help but hope for the best for Wallflower.
Great story so far. Cant wait for more
Is this story anthro? The cover art makes it look like it is.
9456495
No, pony
Alright, cant wait to see what happens next. Loving the build up here.
Dear GODS this place sounds boring
Do these guys by any chance view Celestia as the perfect image of purity and wholesomness ?
...these parents are horrible
This is a cult, this is without a doubt a cult
Wow... Pearly sure has her work cut out for her dosen't she
Ouch
But hey it could almost be worse... you could be Pearly trying to go up aginst Cadance on her home turf
There is gonna be a lot of ponies disappointed in her when she gets back, i just can't see her do well in the Crystal Empire, not with Cadance running the place
And this is why Wallflower will fail in her mission, but succeed at something far greater
Yes on the first two, no on the last one
Loving this so far
9457572
Thank you. And if you haven't already please be sure to check out my other Clocktower stories
9460284
Already have
Oh Wallflower, you have NO idea what you just walked into, 10bits says she bursts into flames from embarrassment next chapter.
Great work can’t wait for the next chapter
Looking forward to more.
-Ru
9469948
Maybe being ignored is her special talent.
She reminds me of the mom from Moral Oral. Never feeling like she has a place in the world, and inevitably latching onto the first person to make her feel needed.
This was nice. I liked the glimpse into marital life and the petty disagreements as everyone gets used to one another. I also liked the reworking of the holiday to be more than single's shaming day.
That said, I'd recommend getting an editor for this story. LOTS of typos. Some don't mind, but I view typos as speed bumps on an otherwise smooth and pleasant drive.
9476901
fixed
9477186
Glad to hear.
Churches like these are why I've lost a lot of faith in organized religion, since they seem to just be tools for overly controlling busybodies to force their will on others while maintaining their public image (and possibly hiding their own misdeeds).
Great story. Cant wait for more
This keeps getting better.
Is that Stallion calling himself stupid named Pinky and does he have a friend named Brain?
Poor Wallflower she just doesn't know how far she is in over head. I hope when she breaks down Lighting Dust and Hunter will be ready to help her out. I think the Sol is about to have a major breach and hopefully they never find out it was her.
Naughty Wallflower, time to rethink your life choices I think
Woo! Great chapter.~
-Ru
Ponies from Hollow Shades noticing Wallflower
... Muhahah, as i suspected 
I'm guessing that it's supposed to be mental ?
I love the Hunter stories, and I'm glad to see a change of scenery to Hollow Shades! Bat pones have always been so cute, I can't wait to see more of this
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Enjoying this, my third Hunter story!
Great work
Hehehe, just be honest with yourself Wallflower. You are not cut out to be a member of the Sol invictus. After all, its not like they have ever done anything for you.
Poor Wallflower she just had a poor overall experience here did she. I hope she gets plenty of help in the next chapter as she needs her psychological head on right before anything else happens becuase she has so many issues due to the paranoia that Sol Invictus has done to her.
Quick tip: writing conventions have a comma before the name when characters address one another. That helps avoid misunderstandings. Look at this example:
versus
A bit if a difference, isn't it?
Cross over to the naughty side, Wallflower. You know you really want to. And I’m sure Hunter would be happy to have another toy to play with.
defiantly worth the wait, I can only imagine the conversation that will follow this
9671751
Commas use improperly can make a panda a very dangerous animal.
...she's gonna walk in on them isn't she ?
More than "a bit"
Not that it will ever happen, but this is a decent enough idea and it is what the Sol should have been doing
...And as i was writing this i just realized that the Sol Invictus might not be around for much longer as Wallflower's sister will probably try to "fix" a certain Princess Mi Amore Cadenza
Well, at least we know where she'll be working when she moves in
Knew it
Oh hello Awkward, how are you this fine morning
9676116
Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are also liked the last two chapters of Spike's Big Case
9676828
Huh, missed that for some reason
Why you do this to me I was waiting to see what would happen once they realize she was there
Ask in turn.
In both cases, a one sentence response will suffice.
"So says the man in charge."
Words are the most powerful weapon in a leader's arsenal. Like with any other weapon, how well they're used and who you turn them on makes all the difference. If you lead those who rely on you down a dark path with lies and deceit, then congratulations, you've just turned your most powerful weapon against your allies. It's worse than a nuke because the damage continues to spread as far as word of mouth allows, and that kind of reach is a terrifying prospect.
I wonder if that has ever actually worked
Maybe you don't need to try something to know I it's wrong or not, but you do need to understand it and you, Wallflower, don't
And with just that one sentence you have far surpassed your sister and many, if not all, members of Sol
Oh I can say she wants everything and anything on the table.
Ten bits says she ends up being the kinkiest one..
I really love Wallflower's characterization. Her thought processes are very realistic. Except for the adorkable parts, which have a different appeal.
This is getting interesting. Can’t wait to see where this goes.
9882776
It's always the shy ones
When are we going to get an update? Im excited to see where this goes.