It begins!!!

Great story so far. Cant wait for more

Is this story anthro? The cover art makes it look like it is.

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No, pony

Alright, cant wait to see what happens next. Loving the build up here.

Pearly White’s had been the largest by a wide margain, complete with a marching band playing loudly as the mayor herself helped her onto the train.

There is gonna be a lot of ponies disappointed in her when she gets back, i just can't see her do well in the Crystal Empire, not with Cadance running the place

Wallflower felt her eyes widen at that. This pegasus, this mare was still speaking to her. Even feeling like she had made a fool of herself, this mare didn’t seem to mind. She was STILL SPEAKING WITH HER! Wallflower could feel something warm rising inside of her as a smile appeared on her face.

Wallflower felt like tears would begin to appear at any moment. She couldn’t remember the last time anypony was willing to be this kind to her before.

And this is why Wallflower will fail in her mission, but succeed at something far greater

Wallflower nodded eagerly, hoping that this was the start of one of her first real friendships. Who knew? Maybe she could make more friends here. Perhaps she could even convince them to join up with the Sol.

Yes on the first two, no on the last one

Loving this so far

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Thank you. And if you haven't already please be sure to check out my other Clocktower stories

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Already have

Oh Wallflower, you have NO idea what you just walked into, 10bits says she bursts into flames from embarrassment next chapter.

Great work can’t wait for the next chapter

Looking forward to more.

-Ru

“Well, we wouldn’t say that,” commented Hunter as he shook his head. “There are ponies out there from all across Equestria who will be coming here thinking they can have all the free sex they want. Mostly stallions. Some coming here to have an affair, thinking that it will be a no strings attached event without having to pay anything beyond their own travel expense. Then there are colts who go around fucking every mare they can.”

“Well then this is your big chance to change that!” said the mare as she reached into her saddle bag. A moment later she pulled out a red, heart shaped medallion and slipped it around Wallflower’s neck. “With that on, all the stallions and mares here will know you’re single. I’m sure by daybreak you’ll have had at least several ponies toppling over each other for the chance just to get to know you. Hopefully you don’t break too many hearts before the final day!”

IF Wallflower continues to be forgotten, I call Mind Magic B******

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Maybe being ignored is her special talent.

This was nice. I liked the glimpse into marital life and the petty disagreements as everyone gets used to one another. I also liked the reworking of the holiday to be more than single's shaming day.
That said, I'd recommend getting an editor for this story. LOTS of typos. Some don't mind, but I view typos as speed bumps on an otherwise smooth and pleasant drive.

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fixed

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Glad to hear.