Lightning and Moondancer's herd plan to celebrate Hearts'n'Hooves day the Hollow Shades way, which is another thestral word for 'orgies'. Wallflower Blush plans on reforming Hollow Shades of their debaucherous ways. Only one of these can succeed.
Hehehe, just be honest with yourself Wallflower. You are not cut out to be a member of the Sol invictus. After all, its not like they have ever done anything for you.
Poor Wallflower she just had a poor overall experience here did she. I hope she gets plenty of help in the next chapter as she needs her psychological head on right before anything else happens becuase she has so many issues due to the paranoia that Sol Invictus has done to her.
Quick tip: writing conventions have a comma before the name when characters address one another. That helps avoid misunderstandings. Look at this example:
For a moment Hunter was silent as he walked. Briefly he glanced to Moondancer’s worried expression, one that a part of him shared. With a member of the Sol in town it might be better if they just laid low for the week until she left. Heck, Wallflower might not even last the entire week. She might bolt out of town when she found out about what happened on the last day! On the other hoof, they could still have fun. It was getting late and Wallflower would probably just go to the hotel and get some sleep. Not to mention that Wallflower didn’t know where they lived. So unless the green earth mare made a habit of knocking on every door or peaking through every window they should be ok.
...she's gonna walk in on them isn't she ?
“Maybe we need to change that a bit,” whispered Wallflower to herself as her vision began to get a little hazy
More than "a bit"
Maybe offer to help those they found in some way. Or maybe offer up a support program where family members could bring the corrupted to them, so they could talk to them in a more comfortable environment.
Not that it will ever happen, but this is a decent enough idea and it is what the Sol should have been doing
...And as i was writing this i just realized that the Sol Invictus might not be around for much longer as Wallflower's sister will probably try to "fix" a certain Princess Mi Amore Cadenza
“But don’t think I’m doing this for free missy. I’ve been needing a helping hoof around this shop for a while now and haven’t found anypony whose up to the task. Last fella I hired took off like a bat trying to escape Tartarus when the Widow Maker tried to eat him. And the one before that kept going to the Eternal Ecstasy, even breaking in after I closed shop! Such a silly filly. Should have just shelled out the bits and taken it home. Would have given her such a discount. Seeing how you stayed behind to help me, well, you might just be up to the task.”
Well, at least we know where she'll be working when she moves in
What she saw was not what she had expected to see.
Knew it
Slowly she looked up and, to her horror, saw that three set of eye were looking at her.
Great work
Hehehe, just be honest with yourself Wallflower. You are not cut out to be a member of the Sol invictus. After all, its not like they have ever done anything for you.
Poor Wallflower she just had a poor overall experience here did she. I hope she gets plenty of help in the next chapter as she needs her psychological head on right before anything else happens becuase she has so many issues due to the paranoia that Sol Invictus has done to her.
Quick tip: writing conventions have a comma before the name when characters address one another. That helps avoid misunderstandings. Look at this example:
versus
A bit if a difference, isn't it?
Cross over to the naughty side, Wallflower. You know you really want to. And I’m sure Hunter would be happy to have another toy to play with.
defiantly worth the wait, I can only imagine the conversation that will follow this
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Commas use improperly can make a panda a very dangerous animal.
...she's gonna walk in on them isn't she ?
More than "a bit"
Not that it will ever happen, but this is a decent enough idea and it is what the Sol should have been doing
...And as i was writing this i just realized that the Sol Invictus might not be around for much longer as Wallflower's sister will probably try to "fix" a certain Princess Mi Amore Cadenza
Well, at least we know where she'll be working when she moves in
Knew it
Oh hello Awkward, how are you this fine morning
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Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are also liked the last two chapters of Spike's Big Case
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Huh, missed that for some reason
Why you do this to me I was waiting to see what would happen once they realize she was there