Lightning and Moondancer's herd plan to celebrate Hearts'n'Hooves day the Hollow Shades way, which is another thestral word for 'orgies'. Wallflower Blush plans on reforming Hollow Shades of their debaucherous ways. Only one of these can succeed.
Poor Wallflower Blush. She needs to be a bit more open with Hunter. I hope she can find some inner peace because she is tearing herself up mentally because of the cult’s brainwashing.
The sight had caused Wallflower to blush as well as marvel, finding them pretty brave to do something like that out in public. Such a thing would never happen back in Mareville as such displays of affection were meant to be private, behind closed doors. Perhaps neither of them felt any shame in showing each other this level of affection. Or…Or maybe finding it shameful was just a Mareville thing.
Is it weird that I skip all the fantasy stuff, too eager to see what happens next in the story to bother with the sexy bits? Like, the story of Wallflower is so compelling that I can't even bother with the sexy stuff? I know it's not right (the sexy stuff is an important part of the story), but I'm just too invested in the actual events and characters to wait!
10668571 Nope, just means that this works well as erotic fiction. My personal definition for erotic fiction is a story with some sex scenes in it, while porn is sex scenes with some story in it.
It would have been amusing if dusty's father was still in office, and have wallflower use her ties to the sol, and ruin him by having him shamed for his prior lifestyle, and abandoning his child/ being abusive.
10685043 That would, unfortunately, threaten Hunter's place in the society, and I am pretty sure it's why Lightning named no names. The best thing for Wallflower right now, is to learn the Sol's ways are wrong. Not Useful when Want to use them.
I really like the pace of this story. Generally, I prefer it when short stories jump straight to the fun parts, but that's different for these longer ones. This is Wallflower's story of personal discovery, coming to terms with how she was raised vs what she wants. You take us through every step of this rationalization and it's impressively realistic. It's a very natural flow of reason. Also, have you heard of Grammarly? It's a great tool for sprucing up writing of all sorts, and even the free version has been a big help for me. There are too many tiny typos for me to list off, so I recommend you get this program to improve your future writing.
Just glad to see it isn't dead.
You aren't gonna cut it are you?
Also, how many more chapters are there?
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Not planning on cutting it. No idea how many chapters are left
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Ok Good. I was worried you were going to cut it because you wanted to finish on Feb 14th.
Keep up the good work.
Don't cut it, dude! We've waited this long, we can wait a while longer!
Poor Wallflower Blush. She needs to be a bit more open with Hunter. I hope she can find some inner peace because she is tearing herself up mentally because of the cult’s brainwashing.
Take your time and plan it out. If it take a few more chapters then it takes a few more chapters.
Good stories like this are worth waiting for.
You're doing a good job catching on to that
Is it weird that I skip all the fantasy stuff, too eager to see what happens next in the story to bother with the sexy bits? Like, the story of Wallflower is so compelling that I can't even bother with the sexy stuff? I know it's not right (the sexy stuff is an important part of the story), but I'm just too invested in the actual events and characters to wait!
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Well we can have both
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Nope, just means that this works well as erotic fiction. My personal definition for erotic fiction is a story with some sex scenes in it, while porn is sex scenes with some story in it.
with dreams like that, you really can write a book.
It would have been amusing if dusty's father was still in office, and have wallflower use her ties to the sol, and ruin him by having him shamed for his prior lifestyle, and abandoning his child/ being abusive.
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That would, unfortunately, threaten Hunter's place in the society, and I am pretty sure it's why Lightning named no names. The best thing for Wallflower right now, is to learn the Sol's ways are wrong. Not Useful when Want to use them.
I really like the pace of this story. Generally, I prefer it when short stories jump straight to the fun parts, but that's different for these longer ones. This is Wallflower's story of personal discovery, coming to terms with how she was raised vs what she wants. You take us through every step of this rationalization and it's impressively realistic. It's a very natural flow of reason. Also, have you heard of Grammarly? It's a great tool for sprucing up writing of all sorts, and even the free version has been a big help for me. There are too many tiny typos for me to list off, so I recommend you get this program to improve your future writing.
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Yeah, I've been thinking about downloading that