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Not checking in here. I may post stories because my patrons are nice and like ponies. Otherwise out of the fandom, sorry peeps.

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Guards, Sheriff's deputies, and reporters all swarm around the Pie family's home. One reporter interviews a local, who's more than happy to ramble on about his neighbors and their shocking secret...

Based on the song of the same name by Shel Silverstein.

This is the T rated version of this story. There is also an M-for-gore version if you're into that kind of thing.

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Comments ( 11 )

I feel like I've read this story before. Not a complaint, mind you. The perspective and character voice are well done, as is the pacing. But this feels familiar.

8995372
Given the infamy of "Cupcakes" it wouldn't surprise me at all to find that somebody else has done the same thing. It's an obvious idea.

Alternately, I posted the first 1/4 or so to my blog months ago when I was working on it, so if you read that, it may be why.

Oh man . . . Still giving it a like but . . . oh man . . .

Loved it!

Nice little dark piece. :)

Now for that second version!

8995372
Huh, now you mention it I know what you mean.

Anyway, really creepy spin off of Cupcakes. Which I hate, but looking at the aftermath is an interesting take on it. Not least because it means that they got caught. So KINDOF a fix fic at least. Not as much as the one where Pinkie wakes up from that as a nightmare and Rainbow helps her calm down when she panics, but it's something.

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It's funny, because I'm really not a huge Cupcakes fan. And yet this is the second time I've written a Cupcakes sequel.

8996121
And one that's worlds better than the mediocre original. :pinkiecrazy:

(The part about pies makes me think of a ponified version of Sweeney Todd, with Pinkie as Mrs. Lovett...)

I've heard of an old granny who would keep the grease drippings from meat and use that as lard.

:pinkiesick:

Why does everyone think PINKIE is the cannibal?

Seriously... FLUTTERSHY is the one who hangs out with animals, can speak to giant Everyfree monsters, and has likely seen hundreds of creatures killing and being killed.

If ANYPONY is going to decide to go feral and eat ponies, it'd be her!

And she'd share with Harry the Bear, since it's the nice thing to do. :yay:

Oh gosh. Mince pies. Minced pony pies. Oh gosh.

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