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ultra1437


Editor, gamer, and smartass. Mostly that last one.

Comments ( 44 )

Feelings eh? Sorry, not my fetish. The rest is nice

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Oh, don't worry. Those will come later.

8798018
Good, we can share a cell. :trollestia:

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the FIB

The Friends in Black?

That's pretty serious! Do you really want to involve them in this?

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Could be a typo. Or it could be the GTA version of the FBI.

The cervix penetration is always a bit of a facepalm to me, but otherwise this was quite interesting and hot. More princest, yay!

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Oddly enough, cervical penetration during sex is normal for horses. :rainbowlaugh:

Ugh. All these authors making stories with feelings. It’s horrible. You should all be banned from the site and dumped in acid. People who like this fetish should all be burned! Infinite dislikes!

Will read it properly later.

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Yep! Idid a little research on that to be sure, actually. It's common with real horses, because the mare's vagina isn't all that deep despite the average stallion's size, and the cervix itself is mostly open anyways.

Lulu is certainly sentient. Being restricted by rules is not the same as being a VI. Sooner or later Celly will have to come to terms that she did create a pony... While stuffing said pony full of cock, and getting stuffed herself by Luna :trollestia:

This is a rather interesting story. It seems to have more plot and character development than most clop stories. Hopefully, Celestia gains her memories of Luna back.

That sucks so hard that Celestia's memory of Luna slowly got wiped after she was banished. Its an interesting re-start for them after this reveal and a whole new relationship emerging as well. There are two things I would love to see come from this story though:

1. Golem Luna gets spit-roasted by the sisters at some point.
2. (Maybe in a spinoff) They send Twilight the golem for a bit while they figure out things between themselves or something. She would flip out over, well, pretty much everything about it. It being such a rare creation and very obviously much more intelligent then probably any other golems that may exist. Then one day she discovers the "extra functions."

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That's kind of what I'm going for, really. I see all those that jump straight into the clop and while it works... I like to have some actual story with it, y'know?

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1) I will admit, that was part of the plan, but I couldn't decide between that and something else for the final chapter. Due to coin flip, the other thing won, and you'll see it soon.
2) There's a reason I didn't in this story, mostly because she's not really part of the focus here, but if/when I do a sequel, it might very well involve Twi doing some research on Lulu.

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That's a mental image I can get behind. Mind-blowing revelations during mind-blowing orgasms.

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Actually researching so that you could have accurate anatomy for writing horse porn?

Dude, I love this site sometimes.

This needs to be submitted to Celestia's appreciation group (if that's still a thing). Despite there being two of Luna, the Sun Pony is the one truly in the spotlight here.

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Eh. I do research to be accurate with other shit, too. Getting called on something and being able to say back, 'no, bitch, you're wrong and here's my source' is one of the greatest feelings in the world.

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This true, but I'm just talking about the dedication it takes to learn something this niche. It's respectable my dude.

Also, check out /r/QuitYourBullshit for more of this if you'd like.

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If you are a part of that group, feel free to add it. I don't believe I am, and that's a shame.

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The (im)possibility wasn't my concern, more that it tends to elicit an image of stabbing pain as it tends to be in humans (and your readers are, I assume, still mostly human). I don't think that's very intentional or desired when writing something meant to be arousing.

Anyway, good chapter again.

Reading through the triggers: Alright, that's fine, yup, hot lesbian sex? I'm in...

>feelings

y-you monster.

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Guilty as charged.

You did well, it wasn't cloyingly sweet, but it was still adorable.

What kind of sick pervert writes about feelings? Honestly, what has this site come to (pun not intended)?

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The sickest of perverts like you and I. Don't lie, that was punintentionally great.

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Where do you get off, bringing feelings to a fetish fic? I came for hot princess-on-princess action, not sweet, loving princess-on-princess action.

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Where do you get off

Right here, baby. Though, you should already know the answer to that by now.

I came for hot princess-on-princess action, not sweet, loving princess-on-princess action.

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Though, seriously, the next chapter will fit that bill more than this one did. I wanted this one to be sweet because of how important it was.

("She now recharges me by mating with me. I know it sounds weird, but her… cum keeps me running. ")
Unf, absolutely love this idea it's just so sexy to me and I would love for more stories to have it.

I don't usually like futa-fics. But this one was worth everything. Very well written, it was a very enjoayble read.

I wish I could upvote this at least 50 times.

Please Sir, I'd like some more.

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Thank you! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

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I can't promise more right away, but I have several hooks laid and I very much enjoyed writing this.

Loved it.

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Thank you! Glad to know you did!

I believe I already told you what I think of this, so...

ur a butt.

Very well done, my dude. Well-written lewds mixed with feels, but in balanced quantities. Good job.

Interesting to see the life rule I follow: If something good happens, something bad will balance that out.

Great story, when 's the sequel?

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And you love it, don't deny it.

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I've got some other things to write first, but I can promise one coming down the line.

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Thank you, I hope this story makes up for my poor performance in the Crucible of late.

8806987
Eh, fair. I don't like airing dirty laundry publicly.

Awww ; ~~ ; All the good kinky fics are so sappy!

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That's what makes them good.

Thanks for the fic!

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