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After noticing how their Princess, Luna, had been aloof and lonely for quite a while since her return, some of her guards decide to take matters into their own hooves.
Written for the Twiluna Skype Chat, specifically, Mighty Biscuit. Because he inspired this with his antics.
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Oh. Nice twist at the end. Really nice. Made me chuckle.
I didn't spot typos - but that doesn't mean there are none. (Tricky little things this typos...)
The Idea was really nice and funny.
Only nitpick I could think of: The one time Luna speaks in the RCV, you could have used this nice Shakesperean English (just love when she speaks this way).
Have my like.
Not bad, I recall seeing some art that would suit this story, of unicorn twilight tied up like that on another story before the author changed the art.
The sound I imagined at this line is going to have me chuckling all night. Well, the sound, the frantic whispered cursing, the fumbling hooves and wings...all of those will keep a grin on my face.
This is the second story I read where Twilight is kidnapped, tied up in red ribbons and delivered to a princess. It's not bad, but it's not the best one.
5684427 Which story is this?
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What Princesses Need by Aegis Shield, which swerved the TwiLuna in the last chapter.
5684587 Nifty
Heh....wish there was more.....
"Welcome to Luna's Batpony Guard! What's your name?"
"I'm Batman!"
And there was a great facehoofing actross the land.
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What Princesses Need is a great story. One of my favorites from one of my favorite authors. When I saw the summary of this story, I immediately thought of it.
Funny, made me lol in the middle of class! I'd love to read more like this!
It's official: my entire 3rd period class thinks I'm weird (apparently, we're allowed to read stuff on our phones). I lol'd at the ending during a test
I came expecting to see batman kidnapping luna.
I was dissapointed.