8799583
That's kind of what I'm going for, really. I see all those that jump straight into the clop and while it works... I like to have some actual story with it, y'know?

8799827
1) I will admit, that was part of the plan, but I couldn't decide between that and something else for the final chapter. Due to coin flip, the other thing won, and you'll see it soon.
2) There's a reason I didn't in this story, mostly because she's not really part of the focus here, but if/when I do a sequel, it might very well involve Twi doing some research on Lulu.

8799510
That's a mental image I can get behind. Mind-blowing revelations during mind-blowing orgasms.

8799420
Actually researching so that you could have accurate anatomy for writing horse porn?

Dude, I love this site sometimes.

8800417
Eh. I do research to be accurate with other shit, too. Getting called on something and being able to say back, 'no, bitch, you're wrong and here's my source' is one of the greatest feelings in the world.

8800468
This true, but I'm just talking about the dedication it takes to learn something this niche. It's respectable my dude.

Also, check out /r/QuitYourBullshit for more of this if you'd like.

8800440
If you are a part of that group, feel free to add it. I don't believe I am, and that's a shame.

8800468
The (im)possibility wasn't my concern, more that it tends to elicit an image of stabbing pain as it tends to be in humans (and your readers are, I assume, still mostly human). I don't think that's very intentional or desired when writing something meant to be arousing.

Anyway, good chapter again.

Reading through the triggers: Alright, that's fine, yup, hot lesbian sex? I'm in...

>feelings

y-you monster.

8800729
Guilty as charged.

I wish I could upvote this at least 50 times.