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Patches in Equestria


There's an opening to some candy-coloured pony-land, right down that hole. I found it first, but, well, we're friends! Don't believe me? Why don't you have a look?

Comments ( 10 )

I really enjoyed the story, but, in the end, everything was just a dream?

i really just really liked the story and that i really appreciate this author and that thanks and that nice

this is a great fic: sexy, well-written, fun, gets the characters right, hits on a good medium between being anxious about incestuous desire and accepting it as a healthy and honest part of herself...very well done! this was way, way better than most of the actual contest winners!

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Well-lovely compliment, mate. Much obliged.

Celestia herself relishes in the sensation

This is a construction I've only encountered on this site, and it's everywhere here and spreading. You don't relish in things. "Relish" means "like," and you don't "like in" things. You're looking for the word "revel." You definitely revel in things, but you don't relish in them. https://www.wordhippo.com/what-is/sentences-with-the-word/relish.html

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Now there's a sharp one. Lemme patch that one right up for ya, there ya are. Damn good catch!

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Thank you much! I don't mean to be sharp, I'm just blindsided by it and I don't know where it's coming from. I spent seventeen years as a professional editor without running into it.

How this doesn't have a billion more likes is beyond me. Brilliantly done!

Present tense absolutely rules for porn.

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