Decent story!

Not bad.

Wonder what else you will do?

Maybe a Chrysalis x human clop?

Or a Dusk SHine x mom, or Gleaming SHield hyper impregnation clop

Ohhhhh maw gaad

XD

Their parents sure got one damn big surprise

My oh my ...

10/10 best fuk

I'm not into M/M, but it was well written, which is something that everypony should appreciate!

Hmmmmmmm... Very hot and good. You should make a sequel that focuses on the fallout of Their parents catching them. Really good potential for drama, more hot incest fuk and romance. Just saying a sequel would be really good just to see how everything progresses with everypony involved.

Good workout indeed!

I think their mother got turned on, of course that's what I think.

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Oh yeah haha. And now their mom needs a good rutting after seeing what her sons were doing. XP

sequel please

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Sequel then?

Of course a person with such high intelligence such as yourself realizes that this requires a sequel. Beautifully written which is something I find not common in M/M fiction. Well done.

why abyss write foalcon? sad face

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It's not foalcon. Both the short and long description says Rumble is aged up. Everyone is 18+ in this story.

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Contains Aged-up Rumble, M/M, Incest, Blowjobs, and Butt Plugs.

Contains Aged-up Rumble

Aged-up

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oh sorry! I dont read good

Is story based on true story? You like dicks yes

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Don't know how he missed that lol. It literally says aged up as the first thing in that list. XP Plus it's not in any foalcon groups, so that should be a good hint.

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This story was a commission, so if I wrote a sequel, then I'd be writing more of what the guy paid me to do for free. I wouldn't mind writing a sequel to this as another commission in the future, though!

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Oh yeah, their mom got totally turned on haha.

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It's all good! And no, it's not based on a true story.

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I dunno about a human x chrysalis clopfic. If I was to do one with a human, it'd most likely be one of the princesses, because they need love too.

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K. Fine with me.

It's just that Chrysalis is my favorite villain

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really? was really good story. I thought past experience was involved! oh well have a like for good fuck

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I'm developing a cute story with her right now. Should be done soon.

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Heh, thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Ok.

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and how much would the commission cost? i'm just curious

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I'm not sure what my rates would be. I'm not opening commissions until I'm getting ready to move.

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Errr, dude? You might have missed the

(Rumble is aged up)

bit in the short description. Just letting you know.

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I think you're missing out on the fact that the account was made about two days ago. Someone made the account for the expressed purpose of posting that comment. Who it was I don't know.

Pretty good story, the only thing that kept me from enjoying it more was the complete lack of subtlety.

This site needs more sexy M/M incest. Especially if one involves some Thunderlane/Aged-up!Rumble clop. <3

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jesus christ how can some people be so fucking dumb

OH NOOOO!!!!!!

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Yo chill it's just erotica, ain't hurting anyone

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He was just playing around.

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wow this is good. i like the little twist at the end too.

Their mom certainly got behind it.

Why? Did? I? Have? To? Read? This?

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I think a better question is why did you read the story? It's rather obvious what it's about.

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Because my mind is horrible and makes me read these types of story's and then i feel guilty the next day. However, i did like your story's "I"ll always be there for you" and "I'll do anything for you"

i kinda want a sequel to this XD

I FUCKING LOVED THIS STORY OMG IT WAS AWESOME GREAT WORK ABYSS!!!

I think we all know why their perants really left