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LegionofPony


I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.

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The next three chapters will be submitted over the next three days, to assure they're of a more polished state. Enjoy the first chapter for now, and Happy Hearth's Warming or Merry Christmas to all!

Oh this is amazing. Please continue.

Nice start! Looking forward to the next few chapters.

speaking of blue balls. shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. gonna have to wait 3-4 days to get to the pic's story. what kinda tease is that legion :c

Finally some Sunburst/Flurry Heart. Man was is naughty stallion/filly foalsitting shipping long overdue since a year ago. Glad to see that I'm not the only one that ships Sunburst-chan with Older!Filly Flurry Heart.. Can't wait to see more. :D

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS, I've been waiting for something like this

Please learn how to format your paragraphs properly. Nothing breaks a good fic like poor formatting >_<

Does enjoying this story make me a bad person. I feel like a bad person for likeing this story.

I want to see the aftermath where Shining "Captain of the Guard" Armour realizes that some putz fucked his literal infant daughter.

This is a fun read, love how it's going so far. I wonder what will happen when Candence and Shining find out about his acts against Flurry, I am guessing that there is going to be a new gelding wizard in the castle soon.

Squicky story, and I hope nothing like this ever makes the featured box ever again.

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It's a gross story about an adult fucking a child. So yes, probably.

People who make shit like this, should be crucified for their degenerate sins.

EDIT: A lot of salty people defending a story that advocates paedophilia (whether fictional or not)
Tis but another brick in the wall of reasons why most people don't like bronies (and I am saying this as a partial-one) all because of the actions of a few

Also people taking edgy bait seriously lmao, but in all seriousness, the writer should have seriously reconsidered this before pressing that upload button.

Don't like paedophiles, never will, doesn't matter if they are fictional characters or not either, but I am not going to implode people's mind in how paedophilia is essentially rape (but this is inb4 everyone brings up the xd "you play a vidya where you kill people!!!" forced meme, like they're soccer mothers incarnate)

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Wow. What a rational, measured response. Calling for painful death for someone who writes something, fictional for the record, that you don't like. Only wish I could downvote your hateful comment more than once.

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Says the guy who plays gta. Et tu, brute?

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If it does I'll save you a sit on hell right next to me, friend.

Do not place me in the same box as anyone making wishes of death or dismemberment or any such.

I Simply do not like this story. I do not like this Sort of story. Regardless of it being about two non humans, it is still a story about an adult, placed in a position of power and authority, using that as leverage [Along with his superior size and mental capacity] to have sex with a child.

I wish no ill on the Author.
I simply wish that this story did not exist.

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Not in the slightest. We can't help what we like; better we find our enjoyment in fiction than repressing it (as most do, sadly) risking trying to find it in reality.

Not really my cup of tea but it was nice so far. I would of course love to see some diaper stuff.

Also your image links do not work I am not sure if that is intentional or not.

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If you consider that a fictional story of magical talking underage horse is even remotely reminiscent of a real life case of abduction, abuse, death threats and murder that is going on with real pedophiles, I'm pretty sure you need help, as you are clearly someone who is sick in the head. If this isn't the type of thing you enjoy, no worries! Just close it and move on with your miserable life. If you are at a point in your life where in order to better yourself and give yourself that much assurance to put a borderline death threat on an author for writing something that they wanted to publish, on Christmas of all times, I seriously feel sorry for you.

Go outside, get friends, get a job, and do something for yourself instead of living off of other's who provide for you and who's only form of enjoyment is through hate.

Side note, great story @legion!

I don't like these stories, and I'm not like others that just dislike this for being one of those stories

 So, I'll just say that this is well written and even if I'm very unhappy to see such things even existing, I will give it a like for a very good written chapter and start with much detail. If I was one of those who criticize because they do not like this type of stories, then you’d probably get a hate comment and a dislike. But I don’t look at the genre, I look at the story, and how its written. I deeply in my soul hope you will use your skills for other stories will less of this.

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Hmm degenerate such a strong term now if your so zealous about your 'threats over a book no less then riddle me this oh you hypocritical soul how do you explain Japan the legal age for sex in Japan is 13 so you complain about this story to make yourself feel high and mighty but come to terms that you live in a world where this happens and the fact you posted your comment in the first place after reading it. you say we are deluded but you are the one who took the time to read and then crucify an author that you generalise as a pedophile where this person could very well be the exact opposite and actually dislike pedophilia but wrote it with either inspiration or superior demand do you know that pornography became more popular because it was in high demand like this the goal on this site is to get featured so you read whats trending and then write a story appealing to the demand so you rant and rave all you like but while your at it decide to fight companies businesses who sell retail goods appealing to the populous to make money so really the only fool is you because you read the story then decided to create flame bait so yeah some may be bucked in the head but you take the cake not to mention how you word your comment could indicate a Catholic belief but here's another fact the Catholic church is one of the biggest offenders of what you so hate and yet you are a follower so your no better then the people you hate.

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The Apogee story had at least the benefit of the girl being Legally and Biologically of age in universe.

You seem to have forgotten your footnotes, what is griffon style?

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I just want to remind you this is how you're spending your Christmas.

What is this? One of my favorite ships by LegionofPony? Sign me the fuck up! :rainbowwild:

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This is my first time commenting on something like this, but I agree that things like this should not exist, pedophiles should not exist. I can't bring myself to read things like this intentionally. This literality makes me sick to the point that I throw up. Also crucifixion is to good a punishment for pedophiles, I can't even see people like that as human.

Everything after the first paragraph read in a cold tone

And for those of you who think I am just some guy or other people with problems sitting at home doing nothing or whatever or with nothing better to do and acting all high and mighty. KNOW THIS I have a damn good reason for my hatred, have something like this happen to you at a young age and see what its dose to you, its different for everyone but one common thing is a deep seeded hatred for pedophiles and anything like it. So it should be vary obvious what I mean by "have something like this happen to you".

This story is going places! Places I like!

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Sorry you don't like the formatting, but I've been using this formatting since my first story. I will look into changing ellipses positions and capitalization, but I will be keeping the < > symbols for thoughts. If you would like to help me by posting the improper
capitalization or other issues in a PM or comment, I'd appreciate it. Also

Thoughts should be placed in single quotes (' ')

No. That makes it even MORE confusing given that single quotes are used for quoting another speaker within dialogue, though what quotation type you use when is really a matter of writing preference or general use where you come from.

Example: "What's a 'quantum'?" asked Sweetie Belle.

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Huh, I used to get the opposite, because I use single quotation marks for dialogue which is more common in British English. Seems you can't please everyone.

OK, now to address the elephant in the room.


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To whom it may concern:

First off, let me get this out of the way. I. AM NOT. A PEDOPHILE. I do not find human children sexy even slightly, and I truly do despise the disgusting people who do cause that kind of trauma to real children. But guess what? THIS IS NOT REAL. THIS IS ABOUT FOALS, NOT CHILDREN. Besides that, despite the cover image showing a younger filly (which is the story view of the commissioner by the way, not me), this is not how I imagined it in my story while writing it. There is a reason why I left the ages ambiguous. In my mind, Flurry is at least 12.


Plus, let's all remember that horses/ponies actually develop at a very accelerated rate compared to humans (pony fillies are fertile and going into heat by 18 months), and pony society may have different views than humans based on that fact. I.E. perhaps when a filly gets her first heat or even gets her cutie mark, she's considered sexually available and an 'adult'. This is inapplicable here (or is it?), but just a point I'm making. Again, I emphasize, THIS IS NOT ABOUT HUMANS.


Secondly, I very clearly listed everything this story contains in the description. If you read this story EVEN AFTER knowing it's contents, how in the hell is that my fault? Get your zealot ass off your high horses, quit belittling people, and just leave your dislike and leave. Wishing death upon me because of something I wrote? If you truly are a person of Christian or Catholic faith, you're a dishonor to your faith, which is based on forgiveness and turning the other cheek.


IT'S CALLED FANTASY, NOT REALITY. If you don't share the fantasy as another, LEAVE THE PAGE and go on your way.


Thirdly, if you have been sexually abused as a child, my heart goes out to you, truly. I was thankful to not to have been exposed to something so scarring, but I know someone who was, and I know that an event like that can truly mess a person up for the rest of their lives. That said, and again, I DO NOT promote real life pedophilia in reality in any way, it is truly the scum of the earth who do that shit, but calling me a pedophile because I wrote this is like saying because a person plays violent video games that they're going to go murder people in real life just like in a game. It's just not true, and studies have been done on it proving such.


Fourthly, this is not the first story written like this on the site, nor is this topic anything new. Nor is it the worst foalcon story, by any measure, in severity of content. Go look around and you'll see this is fact. This isn't going to devolve to forced, violent rape. I hate that shit.


That said, and again, if you do not like the (EXTREMELY clearly-stated) subject of what I write, simply leave your dislike and leave. Or, y'know, just leave.


Merry Christmas, I'm glad you chose to spend it here arguing about a fic than with your family or friends like I am. I'm glad my writing and I mean that much to you.


EDIT: Given my choice of words, I was also asked to add that the cover artist's interpretation of the scene in the related pictures is also to be considered different from mine and the story commissioner's, and does not necessarily match mine nor the commissioner's view of the story.

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I can't see the .gif. link is broken

8630038 Yeah, but I write in the American context, so double quotes are the norm.

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Great job sticking up for yourself! I like your fanfic!

well i might as well get comfy cause this story is awesome.

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Damn right I will. Glad you're liking the story.


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Enjoy!

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I will point out that you can still get introuble for Lolicon art even if the characters aren't human in the united states, people get in trouble for reading Loli hentai even if the hentai says they're 18

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Can you give examples of this happening beacuse I couldn't find any. This is the first I am hearing of something like this.

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That is because lolicon hentai is based on humans, not horses. This is animals, not people. Also, not sure if this is what you're talking about, but the cover art isn't explicit at all, just suggestive. Without context, they're just cuddling.

"My fillyhood? Oh! You mean my princess parts?" Flurry asked, the gears in her head turning now, "But...if it feels good, why'd you make me stop?"

Fucking "princess parts".
I'm actually dying.

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Hey man you do you, i'm just pointing out stuff

this was a great story, so far, can't wait to see more of it soon.

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Jacking it to pictures of real life children in compromising positions is illegal.

Jacking it to drawings of fictitious underage characters in cartoons is not.

It really is that simple.

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