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Why can't i put a like on this story?
Wait.
Archeology.
Stone mask...
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I'm not sure how I feel about this story
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What do you mean?
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Exactly what I said I'm just not sure how I feel there's really no other way to put it
What type of story is this meant to be?
I just translated the title what in the world is the 'fire' supposed to mean
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A simple story that gets complicated
That last bit made this weird double image in my head, the use of masculine pronouns and female descriptions confused me and had the images bouncing back and forth.
On another note, I like what you have here but I can't really see where this is going. It started like it was going to be an adventure of some sort but then shifted to be slice of life/romance. What seems like what was meant to be the main conflict was done with rather quickly. I'm not sure what to think about it, it's well written but it feels like something is missing. Guess that can happen with just one chapter.
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This was originally going to be a one shot, but we just kept writing, and decided to turn it into a full story.
8557507 That would explain it then. But that leads you to another problem, the plot of a one shot doesn't tend to translate to multiple chapters to well. Expanding the story can be difficult as well, I tried it a while ago and it crashed, burned, went nuclear, before finally dying like it should have. The main problem is adding to or extending the original plot, there are a thousand ways to do it but getting it right can be hard. The best thing to do would be to take a step back and plan out a few things first. I find it easiest to lay out the basic plot for each arc first, it just seems to work for me.
Great chapter, but when will brian finally change his name and fully accepts that he is a chick?
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-ing Jojo reference?!
Is that a motherf-
When is the next chapter?
more plz
I read one chapter and I'm hooked.
I really want more of this.
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This is really good! I hope it continues, and I personally really want to see Brian get a new name and have sone pups.
Update please
Oooo, wonder what’ll become of ‘red.’
It liiiiives!
A pleasant surprise
Five apostrophe five. Oops, I guess?
I'm happy to see that this story is not dead, but it's still weird that Brian still sees himself as a guy and continues to use his human name.
Some translation with the Spanish would be nice :)
THIS IF FLIPPING BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
I need more of this. I love this story.
Is this still alive?
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Doesn't looks like it
Great story i hope it continues. First off can i have a translation of what the Wolf God said to Brian. Second: what visions did Brian get from the Wolf God?
I was able to translate, here is what the wolf god said in order:
Why do you cover your eyes, Red
You've adjusted well, Red. I am pleased that you share your vision with my family
I've seen you since you put on the mask, Red. Your life in the village fills me with pride
A present for you, Red. My eyes will be your eyes. My knowledge your knowledge
Use it well, Red. I'll be watching you
There we go that was all what the Wolf God said to Brian. Though it kept calling him "Red" I wonder if the author's planned name for Brian's new life will have "Red" as her first or last name. Oh also Brian said "Thank you" in Spanish
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i've translated what was said in Spanish into English in my comment here