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Comrade Bagel Muffin


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After the world ended ponies still needed a way to get from one place to another and Taxi work, Taxi work never changes. Tax-I only has his wagon and his cheap sunglasses. His funds are low, so when he's hired by a crazy filly he goes ahead and takes the job.

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Really enjoyed this story, it had a fun twist and great action!

Taxi work Taxi work

what

Tax-I only has his wagon and his cheap sunglasses so when he's hired by a crazy filly he goes ahead and goes along with the filly to get a couple more caps.

run-on sentence

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Merci Beaucoup for pointing those out wasn't able to find the first one, where was it?

over cast

overcast

"Hey buddy you're blocking my sunlight."

"Hey, buddy! You're blocking my sunlight!"

"Do you mind scooting to the right or to the left buddy?"

"Do you mind scooting to the right or left, buddy?"

really don't need any where I'm going

really don't need them anywhere I'm going

You need an editor. Badly.

Tax-I only has his wagon and his cheap sunglasses, so when he's hired by a crazy filly he goes ahead, and goes along with the filly to get a couple more caps.

Still a run on sentence.

Tax-I only has his wagon and cheap sunglasses. When a seemingly crazy filly hires him, he has no objections if it means he can get a few more caps.

Fixed, here ya go.

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Merci but I think I got it. Also merci beaucoup for the edits. It's always nice to have someone read the story and take the time to help me with my mistakes.

Wonderful! Absolutly Wonderful! I love the chaos of this story!

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