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Comrade Bagel Muffin


I'm the reason when you search Quibble you'll find Scootaloo too. PM me if you want to talk about anything one on one. Well I finally set up a patreon...Hazaa???

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Daring Do searching through the bad lands hoping to find the Crown of Queens. An ancient artifact from the Unicorn tribe. Following close behind her are two shadowy figures. Are they Caballeron's henchponies. Are they Ahuizotl's henchponies. Is it a couple of obsessed fans. No she wasn't that lucky this time. Flim and Flam, follow the explorer hoping to find the treasure and get rich fast.
Written for the Unexpected Meeting Contest. XD! Guess I'm a bit late for that huh?
Now Written for Oneshottober!

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I have mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, it's a funny premise with a decent execution. On the other hand, there are a distracting number of mechanical errors throughout that really took me out of the story. There is also the issue of the pacing, which feels way too fast in certain places. I imagine that this could have been a solid story if it had gotten a little more time and editing.

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