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I like it, keep up the good work
Well this was a pretty interesting story if I do say so myself. I am a fan of the RD and Spike pairing as well. I feel it started very very strong showing a friendly relationship between the two. But I can tell you kinda lost steam near the end there with just how.... hmm forced or maybe direct that little peeping moment went. I feel with the talent we seen at the start of the chapter we will handle those kinds of moments much better later on, with more sleep lol. I hope we get to see more of RD as a pony and her backstory and what makes her her. Show there is more to her than her attitude and the same for Spike. I hope to see the two of them connect and grow close from their time together. And I think honestly if this spilled over to after the mission and we get to see them struggling with their newly developing feelings when they get back home would be very cool to see. There are just so many places this story could go from here and into the future i can't wait to see where it will end up
Definitely an interesting start, hehe. Would you like an editor, or at least someone to point out some plausible improvements? I think there's a lot of potential, marred by a few errors.
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I appreciate what your saying. It's pointers like these that will help me finish this story and in the future. I want this story to turn out good as well, so I will definitely try my best to make sure that happens.
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I will consider it. Definitely
Thanks. I will, and I love your username btw đź‘Ť
More like fun toys
That went from 0 to 100 fast lol
They're thinking of having sex pretty much everywhere in Equestria?
Wow good chapter.
This as a interesting chapter to say the least. It does help explain what happen with the first chapter now that we know Dash has a habit of being more of a free love kinda pony. So she might not have seen too much wrong with what she has done. I think tho it would be interesting if we get a deeper dive into her mentality of her open relationship with her friends. I think it would be interesting if she end up doing the same with Spike like she did with her friends, since she best chance doesn't see anything wrong with doing that only to find some real enjoyment out of it. And due to that it makes it far more confusing for her since it doesn't feel like just sex with Spike. And honestly with Dash being so free love I think it could open this up to be alot more interesting down the road for our pairing here. Going right into chapter 3 can't wait to see what is waiting for me
Interesting chapter. I was just about to comment that this felt a bit rushed, I mean they have only been out alone for like 2 days or so and they reached this point already I thought there would have been more build up to it than this. But finding out at best this will be a ten chapter story I can kinda see how it would happen. So if this is the case the story needs to go all the way with it. I mean if these two are going to be like this than they need to fully invest into their desire and lust for one another. Have them explore one another and even bringing in some interesting aspects into their mating. Spike is a dragon will years of pent up sexual frustration due to everyone treating him like a baby when he is in fact only a few years younger than them. And Dash is a free love mare that feel like she have finally found her equal.I know this is suppose to be a short story but it could expand farther than ten chapters if you decided with this premise. I think it could be fun if you changed it and made it into a series where you paired Spike off with different one of the mane 6/7 and had over their missions them finding out more about each other and finding romance between the two of them. Anyway interesting chapter, now that the sexual tension is broken I wonder where this story will go from here?
Isn't Spike a bit young for Rainbow Dash?
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I did mention in the chapter that Spike had grown in size, so he is also a bit older than he is in the show.
Well this was a interesting chapter to say the least. I think honestly that the thing that I found to be the most jarring would be how Dash behaved sometime. She seem to act like two different mares much of the time. I mean the earlier chapters we got much more of the feeling that she was more of a free spirit mare that was very sexually active in her social circle. I would just think someone like that wouldn't fall so hard in love after like two or three days and a few matting sessions. She also seemed to gone very affectionate and girly with Spike. That isn't to say Dash can't be like that, but I just always saw her as more of the laid back casual type about something like this and less of the cuddling type lol. And she seem to go more passive with Spike than i would have figured, like when he went out of the cave. I can't see her being willing to let him go out alone in the first place hell she seems like the type to go out on her own before he would lol. I do like that Spike was the one to think they need to slow it down, since she is already wanting to drop the L bomb on things, but I thought at first it would be Dash to pump the breaks on things a bit since she is the experience one and Spike tends to feel things pretty hard as we have seen. Anyway interesting chapter still, I wonder where this will go.
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I'm hoping to make so it's both pleasing and entertaining. I don't want to give it a cheesy sucky ending, I want to make it so it can go places that no one has thought of. I understand how Rainbow Dash's personality is but I wanted Spike to show that he can be just as brave and maybe even as loyal as Rainbow. I know she's more a free spirit but who's to say that she can't be cuddly? It's a side of hers that she probably doesn't show very often, one that I want to show cause she is my fav after all lol. But I do want to end this story on a positive note and do possible sequels.
How old is Spike in this? Would it not be illegal for them to be together with Rainbow being grown? And why so rushed? As cool as sex is the passion should be laid out slowly and planned in a realistic matter, otherwise it's just sex, and that can change fast. But it's your story, I'll be keeping an eye on it.
Omg I hate slut Dash sorry but ima have to dislike
Good for a first, but could be better. Just a few things to work on; 1. Spike is a Dragon, not a dog! Claws and Roars, not Paws and Howls. 2. Stop with the giggling, please. Have him chuckle or laugh instead, thanks.
Good luck with the rest of your story!
I know this is romantic and this is a pretty good story, but I keep thinking "If Twilight ever finds out about this, will she arrest her for being a pedophile, or yell at Spike for having sex with her old spoon taster?"
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Best comment I have received. Lol
Not bad. I hope twi dose't bust her wing to bad.
Interesting, though I thought analysis was supposed to hurt.
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Not really slut dash, there's plenty of people who have an active sex life like that.
Bet you they're doing it every day.
This story has potential, it's a shame it's hampered by the author's unfamiliarity with the english language.
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I'm all ears.
Enjoying this so far.
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I'm glad to hear that.
Wow this was a good chapter, i love the way there friendship problem found them.
Over all 11 out of 10 on the awesome scale.
Great work well done
A few errors but not bad, for some reason I thought friendship problems had to do with serious threats
All in all not bad.
In all honesty I think you did great I love this story and I can’t wait for another chapter or more chapters
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Good to hear. Thanks for the comment.
The next chapter should be up very soon.
Good chapter
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I am, too. The writing has some flaws, but nobody is perfect.
As for you, mister author, congratulations on coming up with a fantastic premise.
yet another really good chapter, i hope twilight doesn't freak out to much when she finds out
Great work can wait for the next chapter
Rather impressive. I enjoyed this chapter.
That was good!!
Wow this story was the hottest i have read in a long time.
They ever done it in the showers at Wonderbolts Academy?
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Maybe, I might that add that into a chapter in the future sequel.
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Glad to know I'm doing something right!
Adorable ending. I kinda skim read the clop parts cos it's not really my thing but I love how you added a significant amount if the story which was plot. Some semi clop fics don't add much detail to the none clop parts. Cute story overall and looking forward to what you wrote next :)
You could eat eachother!
#sexjoke #cantstopwontstop
Lol
The sexual tention that was hidden inside them finally release and now their lives will be forever changed. Their true feelings about themselves is a sign that their love, no matter how passionate or rough it is, will bound themselves forever....may the love flow through them during their journey even if it causes them great sorrow or happiness
Their love blossomed just like I said, and again right in their bed
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alright I have to admit that was funny AS HELL, AHAHAHA!!!!
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That was pretty funny!