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So, many, fucking, out, of, place, COMMAS,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,!!!
(Just a joke. dont take it wrong :3 )
5161032 heh thanks anways!
no esta nada mal un buen comienzo veamos como continua ^.^
Not bad.
5161256 wow muchas gracias amigo!!!
Bro this was awesome please continue!
I'm surprised the like/dislike ratio is as good as it is despite the story description being as bad as it is. Spelling, grammar, and formatting are all terrible and I havent even started reading the story itself.
5162621 well you've read the warnings and I obviously need a proofreader or and editor
But thanks for the critcs , you are welcome
Yeah update, though tge grammar not so good... though I guess I shouldnt be talking
5165378 weré on a same boat fella
5165505 :)
on haitus?? is good history u.u
5166553 the other capitles are on my computer , they just need a little editing ;)
The Dragon Twister known as Spike.
Que tal, mi querido compatriota. Estoy dispuesto a darte una mano con la edición, pero debes saber que tengo una maldicion que provoca que toda historia que edite nunca se termine. Ya ha pasado 2 veces, jaja.
5167150 realmente lo aprecio amigo! Cuando podemos empezar?
5167906
A partir del jueves por la tarde. Monta la historia en un googledocs y editaré los capitulos.
¿Qué pedo?
WHOA !! Esto se está poniendo un poco caliente, me encanta cuando Pico jodido Crepúsculo y Pinkie (Pinkie Pie My Favorite MLP Personaje)
Pobres Derpy Pezuñas, Pero la amamos para que , usted está pensando en tener un sexo de Spike Royale con Derpy Cascos, Pinkie Pie y Twilight Sparkle, ¿verdad? Porque si es así, entonces estoy tan en !!
Tal vez usted puede tener a Spike tiene relaciones sexuales con cualquiera Applejack o Rainbow Dash.
Me encanta la historia!!
5170688 i can understand english , so why bother using Google Traductor?
5170791 Sorry about that, But that Chapter was pretty amazing, I Hope Derpy will get a Sex Royale with Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, and Spike the Dragon...
5171065 i'll keep that in mind ;)
You are going to get more ratings
5175203 thanks
5176847 now thats it's in groups people will know it and read it
5172043 i hope so...
Great for me! and me either now what? Derpy you're on?
well... hehe...
That story was SUPER GOOD, although you might want to get an editor or something. It would help.
This story is actually pretty amusing. Hope you post more soon
aaahhhhh hhhmmmm........ well this has been an experience.......(hope to see more soon)
Please, continue, please. I want see where it will go.
Very great story, and it seems I'm the 666th viewer. mwehehehehehe :3
I do hope this one continues. I found it funny and quite sexy.
Most excellent.
5483597
I dont know why but that comment with that god damned furball in your pic had me in stitches
I actually want to see more of this story please
He should just do it to Rarity.
About halfway through the chapter, I'm surprised Spike didn't decide to murder either Rarity, Twilight, or whoever this stallion is.
But....Rarity is already with someone Spike. That's how the entire 1st chapter happened.
Most excellent story.