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PonyPlasmaCore


meh , nothing yet

Comments ( 29 )

that's a weird way to meet your love interest

This piece is in desperate, desperate need of an editor and a proof reader.

There are words missing in too many sentences and paragraphs to list that makes it hard to read and to follow. The spelling is fine but the grammar needs work.

7145352 thanks for your comment.

I'll make sure to find an editor and proofreader to make this story all more good.

Yesss keep it up dude this is mint :pinkiehappy:

...I'm honestly expecting Rainbow to suggest a threesome with Flutters at some point.

Really starting to get into this story. It's straight to the point, no beating around the bush, if you'll pardon the pun, and pretty funny.

I humbly ask for more. Also I expect a broken or fractured pelvis.

Continue it's grate so far also love this part funny as all hell.

“Truly I’m not pleased with the idea of him dating Rainbow Dash” Rarity said coldly “Even thought I was the one who shown interest on him in the first place when he appeared on my house looking for a change of clothes…” She made an unladylike grunt “I should be the one courting him! The one who’s always at his side! The one showing him the rich and expensive life of Canterlot! The one who screams in pleasure at three in the morning! Not her!”

Who's the artist?

7184379 thanks.

i'm truly pleased that you love my story, don't wait long for the next part though

:raritywink:

7187328 you mean the cover pic?

I just found the pic on Google, I think I should find the artist who made it and post it here but I haven't got the time...

7301766 Course, but I've had a little situation going on. The neighbor's dog bit me on my middle finger and broke it in two the bone. Now I've got a nail on my finger supporting the two pieces of bone until it heals...

7357605 why did the dog bite you for and why was it your middle finger instead your hand or leg? P.s. I hope you feel better soon

7396222 they were fighting. My brother and I went to try and separate them, he went on our dog and I on the other, we pulled, yanked even kicked to ease them out but no avail. Lastly, I opted to grab it's neck to cut its air passage , that's when it turned head and bit me on the finger. But I'm okay now, the nail has been removed now I'll just have to wait and try not to use that finger much.

So... I'm just gonna go ahead and follow this tale, if ya don't mind.

ANON RUN!!! THEY'RE GONNA RAPE YOU!!!

:pinkiegasp:OHMYGOSHTHISISSOAMAZINGANDIAMACTINGLIKEPINKIEBUTIHAVESOMETHINGTOSAY




ANONYOU'REINBIGTROUBLE

tired of seeing plants you looked at the high sky adobe

Any satisfying documents and projects to enjoy up there?

Please continue this story

Ilove this so can't wait to see where this goes.

Ilove this. story so far Ihope they make a herd soon.

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