I once wrote a thing and it might be here soon maybe.
Spike knew his services were no longer required after all those guards and servants and... He moved in. Twenty five years later, Twilight's negligence comes back to bite her.
Spike the dragon unleashes his full power as a dragon, and get's his revenge on Twilight for all her years of forced labour and abuse.
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Cover art by you? Must know so I can read in peace.
3286979 Unfortunately not, but here's the link:
http://residentfriendly.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-and-Spike-360870915
So it begins.
how disappointing. like, fav, read commence!
...This is what I would call those 'gangsta' fics. with some 'heartwarming' moments in it.
damn. Liked it, and if a sequel was going to long enough, it could be interesting if Spike stayed with Twilight and went to war with the dragon kingdoms of the south.
forgive my french but....
LIES! shes with that limped dicked, blue haired faggot, arse gravy guzzling, shit cunt faggot faced wanker Flash!
if she did love you she would have beat him to death with an ice pick and burned his remains! 
(incase you didn't know i don't like flash or any fics where he and Twi get together 
)
I vote for Spike killing off Twicunt.
I didn't like this spike talking "gangsta", he would have a better vocabulary, all those years living in a library must left a mark, the idea of spike left the ponys to live among dragons is nice, this is where you should put more background, his encounter with his parents, that he is a lord, the betrayal of the ponies, that can give a better direction for the history and give Spike more motives to fulfill a revenge or forgive Twilight.
3287665 THIS TIMES A THOUSAND! Ass Entry should die!
Let her live
kill
Kill her do it now
3287665 Well said.
I hate Flash Sentry as well.
3288239
Cut his head off and shove it up his own ass.
FINISH IT!!!
Crazy revenge Spike is best pony.
Errr... the story's pace was as fast as a goddamned sputnik.
Twilight must defet "the Preciouss" in the mind's Spike Novakihl.
3291188 I know... Sorry about that, I'm new to writing. I'm sure my later stories will be better paced.
You would have uma good history, but, that chapter, aaaaargh!
Wait wait WAIT! Twilight is dead?
For this rushed of a story, it is surprisingly well written... well done!
My God... This is so rushed and incoherent that is not even funny.
This the LITERAL summary of the story:
"Once upon a time you died and I lived happily ever after.
The End"
Seriously, very rushed.
Interesting concept, but you have no detail!
And then you just kill Twilight and end it?
Sheesh, this is poorly made or not very well thought out...
Holy fuck this is rushed to high hell.
Cover art spike looks like a Pokemon.
too fast
Twilight would have friendship’d the fuck out of you.
Funny bu sad story in all
FINISH HER!!!
SHE SHALL BURN
Nope.
FINISH HER
Shove it up your ass moron.
I just don't even know.
This entire story is completely rushed! Oh man, you had a really good concept but instead of diving in and really developed in it you instead wasted on a very rushed and poorly written story.
What a waste.
3995668 true very true
This feels like something edgy teenage Spike would write when he's upset with Twilight.