Interesting chapter. I was just about to comment that this felt a bit rushed, I mean they have only been out alone for like 2 days or so and they reached this point already I thought there would have been more build up to it than this. But finding out at best this will be a ten chapter story I can kinda see how it would happen. So if this is the case the story needs to go all the way with it. I mean if these two are going to be like this than they need to fully invest into their desire and lust for one another. Have them explore one another and even bringing in some interesting aspects into their mating. Spike is a dragon will years of pent up sexual frustration due to everyone treating him like a baby when he is in fact only a few years younger than them. And Dash is a free love mare that feel like she have finally found her equal.I know this is suppose to be a short story but it could expand farther than ten chapters if you decided with this premise. I think it could be fun if you changed it and made it into a series where you paired Spike off with different one of the mane 6/7 and had over their missions them finding out more about each other and finding romance between the two of them. Anyway interesting chapter, now that the sexual tension is broken I wonder where this story will go from here?
The sexual tention that was hidden inside them finally release and now their lives will be forever changed. Their true feelings about themselves is a sign that their love, no matter how passionate or rough it is, will bound themselves forever....may the love flow through them during their journey even if it causes them great sorrow or happiness
They're thinking of having sex pretty much everywhere in Equestria?
Wow good chapter.
Interesting chapter. I was just about to comment that this felt a bit rushed, I mean they have only been out alone for like 2 days or so and they reached this point already I thought there would have been more build up to it than this. But finding out at best this will be a ten chapter story I can kinda see how it would happen. So if this is the case the story needs to go all the way with it. I mean if these two are going to be like this than they need to fully invest into their desire and lust for one another. Have them explore one another and even bringing in some interesting aspects into their mating. Spike is a dragon will years of pent up sexual frustration due to everyone treating him like a baby when he is in fact only a few years younger than them. And Dash is a free love mare that feel like she have finally found her equal.I know this is suppose to be a short story but it could expand farther than ten chapters if you decided with this premise. I think it could be fun if you changed it and made it into a series where you paired Spike off with different one of the mane 6/7 and had over their missions them finding out more about each other and finding romance between the two of them. Anyway interesting chapter, now that the sexual tension is broken I wonder where this story will go from here?
The sexual tention that was hidden inside them finally release and now their lives will be forever changed. Their true feelings about themselves is a sign that their love, no matter how passionate or rough it is, will bound themselves forever....may the love flow through them during their journey even if it causes them great sorrow or happiness