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Dashie1791
Have become a big fan of the series and the fandom since I was introduced to it. Probably the best decision I have made.
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I liked it, a little more editing might help, but it was still good.
Loved it, hopefully it will get a sequel
It was good, but it needs some editing. Some of the phrasing and language just felt clunky
It seemed a bit over-exuberant at some points, and as others have said the language and phrasing feels off. I would like to add that some of it, such as the moments of Anon feeling that having sex with Star is better or just good, would do fine if explained more and in thought form instead of just text. Other than that though, this wasn't bad, I would love to see a redone or reworked version of this
That was some heart warming shit at the end, nice job man. I personally didn't notice any grammar mistakes so good job.