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Twilight floated a second fritter up to her mouth when she realized the first was gone. “What is in these things?” “Mostly love. Love ‘n about three sticks of butter.”

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Applejack and Big Macintosh both have dates for the evening, but Apple Bloom isn't about to let them out of the house until her curiosity is satisfied. . .

This could be a while.

(If you are against fillyfooling or coltcuddling, this is not the fic for you.)

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Comments ( 71 )

Very well done. I look forward to reading more.

I have a feeling about this.

I'll read it later.

*edit*- Just like a little sister would be! Ha ha!

you are awesome and you should feel awesome. Totally worth waiting for two days to come out.

I would only expect as much from you.

Good story so far :pinkiehappy:

D'awwww.
Equestria's two worst liars at their best.

Haha, great work. I got a good smile out of seeing them dancing around the subject. Didn't see that ending coming. Keep up the good writing! :twilightsmile:

921982 :unsuresweetie: Edit: Nice save by editing your post.

This was awesome.

921982 you do know that can get you banned, right?

I was wondering what fillyfooling was. Very dawing. I was starting to wonder what in the hay was going on. One more thing, isn't Caramel (maybe Caramel Apple) related to Big Mac? Good story though.:scootangel:....actually scratch that last part. Caramel and Caramel Apple are two different ponies.

LAWL! :rainbowlaugh:

CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS FILLYFOOLERS YAY!

Oh, Apple Bloom, so young and such a troll.
I'm sure somepony is proud of her. :trollestia:

922038
Yo.

I did not see that ending coming. Bravo.

Eeeyup. Fine fic.

And after 2 days it's finally been approved

Nice story but I already knew that:pinkiehappy:

CUTIE MARK CRUSADER FILLY FOOLERS! YAY!

That was good! Great job! :pinkiehappy:

Appledash? Caramac? Me gusta :pinkiehappy: Also paper-thin lies are great.

I smell feature.
Nice.
:P
Seriously, this deserved the like and fav I gave it. That ending... it's like I wanted to expect it, but I didn't know it was a one-shot, so it took me both by surprise and not by surprise. It was just good. /)

SOMEONE DISLIKED THIS!!!! Someone grab my crowbar:pinkiecrazy:

922005>>922020
What did he comment before? I must know. Those reactions.... those are bad. So I must know.

My reaction? Insta-favourite without even reading, cause' I know it's going to be sooooooo good!:ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowwild:
EDIT: I knew it! This is SO AWESOME!:rainbowkiss:

The description, or more specifically the mention of fillyfooling/coltcuddling, spoiled half of the ending but luckily nothing hinted towards the very end happening! Great fic, have a moustache of approval :moustache:

922333

He had commented, and I quote: "First!"

Oh Apple Bloom, you troll. I bet when Applejack tells Apple Bloom, she'll be expecting dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applebloom.png but will get dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png and "I've known the whole time."

922876
And you can get banned for that?
Stupid fucking mods. RAGE AGAINST THE MACHINE

:scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry: CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS FILLYFOOLERS ARE GO! :D I died. And then the end. Unexpected! Love it. Hope for more! You get five Applejacks. :ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug:

923055

Don't diss the mods, the mods do a good job.

I, for one, am in full support of banning those who have nothing to say but "First". Non constructive, spammy comments that don't have anything to say to the author have no place here.

(The irony is that I'm doing exactly that. Sorry, bookplayer, loved your fic! :twilightsheepish:)

trolling morning til evening dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png :rainbowlaugh:

great 1st chapter. i gotta say im normally not into coltcuddling. not cause the stallion on stallion really. meanly cause no stallion in MLP really interest me. plus Caramac shouldnt be i think. Caramel in my head cannon is related to the Apples so Caramac isnt just coltcuddling but incest as well.

after saying all that i also say that for this fic i'll throw the 'related' part of my cannon out the window. reading a coltcuddling fic is going to be a new experience foe me darling. :raritystarry: i hope you dont disappoint. :duck:

P.S. i know you wont :raritywink:

921982
This is a one shot for now. I'm not opossed to a sequel someday, but with two ongoing projects I can't make plans right now. Glad you enjoyed it, though!

921989
I guess it was worth the wait. That's a surprise, I didn't even know if I should publish it or not. But on your advice, I'll just feel awesome for a bit.

921991
Thanks!

922003
Writing lying AJ is so much fun.

922005
Thank you! And don't worry about the superfluous comments, I totally understand.

922026
Thanks! Yeah, you'll see the term "fillyfooling" around in fics.

922035
Thanks!

923319
The real irony is that the comment in question was never intended to be anything other than a placeholder until something meaningful could be written.

922038
Trolling is so much easier when you have those great big eyes and a cute little bow. Who's suspect such a sweet little filly?

922092
Thank you!

922093
Thanks.

922145
Thank you!

922178
I'm glad you liked it! And I love writing AJ lying.

923941
As much as I liked this, I'm glad to hear it's a one shot, because that means more Best Young Flyer!!!

Oh, wow, this is way closer to reality than you might think. Seriously, that conversation gets annoying after the sixth time you have it.

Good story all around. Despite being short, characters are fleshed out and true to type, and the dialogue is spot-on. I'm trying here, but really, I have yet to find a single thing to complain about. Good work, a thousand times good work. :twilightsmile:

924152
Seriously? The CMC are trolling hard, even in canon. :scootangel:

922273
I don't think I quite made it. . . that tends to happen to me. But c'est la vie! I'm just glad you enjoyed it.

(And I was online the night that the "first post" thing finally ticked off the mods. Two users were posting first on every story on the front page, then arguing with each other in the comments when they'd both post at the same time. I don't mind a "first" every now and then, but if I was one of those authors I would have been ticked off too. Besides the fact that I've never seen what was so awesome about posting first. (Also the ban is only for 24 hours.))

922334
I'm glad you have so much faith in me, and I guess it's lucky you like this one! I hope I never disappoint you.

922385
Thank you! Yeah, I would have rather left that off, but I'd rather live in a world where no one would insta-dislike just because a character was portrayed as gay. I didn't really have faith that I live in that world, so I warned. I figured there was still the twist at the very end.

922556
Awesome Dash is Awesome. Glad you liked it!

922936
And Applejack will be like :ajbemused:. I might someday write a sequel, and in that case things will be much less simple then that. :ajsmug:

923110
Maybe someday. I've got The AppleDash Project and Best Young Flyer to write right now, so it might have to wait a while. Glad you liked it!

923580
There's a Caramel Apple, who's a girl, and is an apple, then there's Caramel (the guy) who just has a horseshoe cutie mark, so he's probably not an apple. And this one is just a one shot (for now. It might get a sequel someday.)

But I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for having so much faith in me!

924412
I can imagine! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much.

AWW COME ON! :ajbemused: :eeyup: REALLY?!?

Apple Bloom's a boss. :rainbowdetermined2:

924734 I've done a story using a similar concept (by a good stretch of the imagination, at least) and so I find it nice that others use homosexuality and the Apples. You got bonus points for that, but you hardly needed them.

924134

Nothing ironic about that.

Why is there even a need for a placeholder, though? Just write what you have to say and send it when it's ready.

Haha! I loved reading this, really left a smile on my face :ajsmug: Hope to hear more from you soon and another update on "The AppleDash Project" :rainbowkiss:

924823
Yes. For this story, really. :ajsmug:

924850
Don't even try to mess with Apple Bloom.

926114
Thanks!

928054
Thanks! I will be at work on The AppleDash Project tomorrow, expect it this weekend at the latest.

I was smiling during the whole story, and when the ending came, I laughed out loud. Applebloom wins again!

Magnificent! :rainbowlaugh:

Also, nice reference to "Waiting for Godot." :moustache:

It was so much fun to read ;3

That final line just about killed me. :rainbowlaugh: Please for the love of cake do a sequel? i'd love to see more of this,

Ahahah, Applebloom the ponytroll.

I like it. XD

Really, the only way that ending could have been better is to have Granny Smith giggling with Applebloom.

BTW:

Cutie Mark Crusaders: Fillyfoolers!

I'm so fucking writing that.

Hah, so good! :heart:

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