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TwilieTheFoal


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Twilight was practicing a spell with Starlight glimmer, only to have starlight turn the mane 6 to foals and then get transported to celestia's castle. Now Luna and Celestia have to take care of them until they find ponies willing to adopt the mane 6. Who will adopt the mane 6? Or will they choose they're own parents/family instead?

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 17 )

This is pretty good and adorable for a first fic. Good job :twilightsmile:

Nice story so far! I hope to see Starlight getting very upset with herself (yes. I'm a Starlight hater).

Keep it up!

just a silly question but Why would any of the mane 6 need to be adopted? Almost all of em have known family, Such as the Apples, Twilight's family, we know pinkie lives with the cakes, and we have even met Fluttershys parents. So I am kinda confuzzled why they'd need adopted.

8133839 They would need to be adopted because some of them don't want to live with their original parents. Besides, I think it's better if they choose who they'd like to be with over Celestia and Luna just hoofing them to their parents. Even if that's not what you mean I still think that it's better this way. But thanks for reading!

Great Story. It's a little rushed for the ​most part, but all you need to do is slow down the story telling. Other than that, I liked the idea of your story.

8135987 Thanks for reading.

But, how is the story rushed? I just want to know, that's all.

8135987 The first chapter starts off in one spot and out of nowhere, it ends up in a different place.

How did the rest of the Mane 6 turn into foals?

Why did the Mane 6 not try to find a reversal spell?

You have to give some reasons.

Comment posted by TwilieTheFoal deleted Nov 19th, 2017

The end of the chapter is the same as the first one.

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