• Member Since 19th Apr, 2017
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TwilieTheFoal


No longer making stories.

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Rainbow Dash finds 2 matching necklaces that she thinks will look perfect on Rarity and Applejack. But turns out, the necklace is enchanted and makes the wearers turn into foals. Rainbow Dash must be the mom of these fillies.

Request from: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/209802/superfun

Superfun i'm sorry for taking way too long on this requested fic. I hope you like this fic and I hope all those months of waiting were worth it. Again i'm so sorry.:fluttershysad:

Edited Vector in Ms Paint by me.

Rainbow Dash vector : https://vector-mlp.deviantart.com/art/Vector-Rainbow-Dash-6-654051616
Foal Applejack Vector : http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/625/006/a9e.png
Foal Rarity vector: https://t2.rbxcdn.com/3df64801e710e311d2e866ad52fd8212

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

posting the whole story at once i like your style to short though

8641055
Thanks. You'll find the third chapter kinda long. It took me a while since I had writers block for some parts. I hope it turned out well though. :twilightsmile::twilightblush:

This was an adorable chapter.

Though my one criticism is that I feel like the story of Diamond Delight and Li'l Appleseed should be it's own side chapter, rather than a section of this one.

This was an adorable story overall,

I already have an idea for a sequel, could I send it your way now?

8641885
Sure. But maybe later. I'm heading off to bed right now. I'm so glad you liked it :)

that was a good story do more when you can and it was a adorable story as well

Idk what to say bus cool

How did they know the names of the I've cream flavors?

...... Rainbow did you try taking them off of them?

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