• Member Since 21st Apr, 2014
  • offline last seen August 16th

HMXTaylorLee


I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to.

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In the wake of Granny Smith's passing, Apple Bloom finds herself shouldering responsibilities to make ends meet on Sweet Apple Acres. Despite her previous efforts to prove that she's grown up, she wants nothing more than to feel young and carefree again.

Pre-read by the ever-awesome RaylanKrios.

The wonderful cover-art was completed for me by the gracious Oliver-England.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

I have been waiting for this since I saw the picture. :pinkiehappy:

Will read later once I have the time. Def seems interesting.

I'm feeling the feels already!

Are u going ferther if u r reply:heart:::heart::heart::heart:

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This story is going to have three chapters.

They are already planned, they just need to be written.

Ha I laugh at their pain

I have been referred here by the wonderful artist Oliver England, the one who designed the original cover for this.:derpytongue2:
I highly look forward to reading . Unfortunately, I am a little sleepy, but I do this kind of writing as well, and as I can tell from the description, it looks like that you create the realism and relatability in that story. (my example is abuse and wanting the younger side to heal, so the death and wanting the simpler life is very close and heartfelt.

To CAPTURE and ALLURE the audience with this kind of ability and real moments that can actually happen, but yet not happen already tells me I am in for an adventure. I highly look forward to reading this tomorrow after working on a 3D model for a friend :)

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Thank you for the vote of confidence! I hope you enjoy this story, and some of my other ones. I will update them soon, I promise.

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Of course, I am very patient, I hope you have fun, and I am glad to help. :) and also, I here you are serving. A thank you sadly is all I can give, and theres not much i can give to express the thanks to what you do for your country.

I must say, you handled scene descriptions quite expertly here. Also, the dialogue felt natural and flowed so well, plus you got their voices down pat. I shall eagerly await the next installment, and shall happily read your other works. :twilightsmile:

This is as good as I remember, hope to see the next chapter when you feel,it's good enough

Its been months since this story has been updated, but I still love it anyway

nice start, i can already tell this will be a good story

when is there going to be an update :( it's been over a year :fluttercry:

I was excited for this but it doesn't seem to be continuing #sad

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Four years. You sure it’s not dead?

We need more, please.

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