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Found the show in late 2015, and fell in love with it. I also like D&D (3 and 3.5), Fansty novel and movie, Sci-Fi movies. MarbleMac is Best Ship and Flashlight is a fair second

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This story is a sequel to My Little Mages: The Remarking of Time


After moving into The Castle of Friendship, Starlight has begun her lessons in friendship under Twilight's wings. However, the Summer Sun Celebration is only a day away and Shining Armor and Cadance's baby is expected any day.
As Twilight is excited about the arrival of her niece or nephew and has found out that Starlight's first friend Sunburst has moved to Krystalopolies, once the invitation to the Crystaling of the newborn arrived, the decision was made.
However once in Krystalopolies, Twilight finds out that Shining and Cadance could use her help. Thus Starlight has to confront her old friend with Spike and a Twilight checklist.

What about Shining Armor's and Cadance's child can cause so much stress on the two?
Will Starlight and Sunburst reconnect?

Wait... Did I hear that correctly? The Crystal Heart Broke? And the Wendigos have returned???

Can a solution be found or will Krysalopolies be blanketed in ice and snow?

A My Little Mages AU Retelling of "The Crystaling"

Cover art by ig-64, and used with permission

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

“She’s kind off slow when action is called for.” Rainbow Dash completed Fluttershy’s statement.

Yeah, she is, but I'm like that too, so I can understand.

Twilight then shut the window and returned to Starlight, “Sorry about that, but Rainbow and I made a bet and I just won. Anyway, back to the lesson.”

Are these weird, friendly side bets going to be a regular thing in your stories? :rainbowlaugh:

Hold on. If the Mane 6 aren't going to the Crystalling, who is going to give Flurry Heart presents? :pinkiesad2: Okay, I know this is a dumb question with an obvious answer :ajbemused:, but I thought AJ, Rarity, and Dash going through the trouble of making Flurry gifts was adorable, and I kind of didn't want that to be adapted out. Anyways, your call. :twilightsmile:

A new chapter and a new story in the same day? You're on a roll!

Good chapter, liked how you focused more on the characters' interactions and expanded them.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next story started. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, very good job on the characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the combination of general episode faithfulness with additional details, including the other strongly-considered first friendship lessons, the friendly wager between Rainbow and Twilight as well as Starlight's description of her past dynamic with Sunburst and the detail of Twilight Velvet writing a Daring Do graphic novel .

At any rate, I will most assuredly be looking forward to more of this, but will also be VERY willing to respect how real life matters will need to take top priority.

Thanks for posting this story on my birthday! This is a real treat since Flurry Heart is one of my favorite characters.

Twilight then went to the window opened it and called out. “TWENTY MINUTES! I TOLD YOU I COULD HAVE IT DONE IF I HAD AN EXTRA HOUR!!!”

Rainbow Dash’s voice was heard almost cursing, “BUCK!!!”

This is funny! :rainbowlaugh:

8651621 Dwayne 'The Rock' Johnson said it better than I ever can, so... in his words... as Maui

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Okay, I know this is a dumb question with an obvious answer:ajbemused:

Not necessarily true, :raritywink:.

Yeah, Pinkie scares me even more here. It's ALWAYS the silly ones!

Once again, splendid job on the latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations, added information and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the details concerning the Crystal Heart and the Windigos as well as Twilight and Flash's reunion, the extra details concerning Shiny and Cadance's VERY understandable exhaustion , exactly how rare naturally born demigods are AND the amount of difficulty Twilight and Flash are having with Flurry Heart even before the Crystal Heart shatters.

Yeah, I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more than this, but am also mature enough to respect that you have your own life that must take top priority AND that inspiration might not be always easy to come by. Thus, it's very likely that patience could be required.

Okay, my thoughts:
1. Yes! Baby gifts! I love baby gifts. Thanks for somehow working that element into this chapter.
2. OH MY GOSH! FLASH! I haven't seen him in your stories in a while. "squeal!" :pinkiehappy:
3. Okay, that awkward, unintentional bro-hug on Shining's part is just making me ship Flash and Twilight so much harder. :rainbowlaugh: Is that weird? :applejackunsure:
4. You've got to finish that Siren story as soon as possible. It's leaving a bit of a hole in this story, especially in the question of why Flash and Twilight haven't spoken to each other in a while. :ajbemused:
5. Aww, baby Flurry Heart likes her "Uncle" Flash. :rainbowkiss:
6. You owe me a heart transplant. Do you have any idea how many times my heart blew up while I was reading this chapter? :heart::ajbemused:

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1) Hey, Twilight made a big deal about it.
2 and 3) What? What did you say? I can't hear you! I think your "squeal!", messed up my eardrums...
4) (regains hearings) Oh, it's coming.
5) NO SPO... oh whom and I kidding :ajsleepy:
6) I have no hearts to gives, I am a Nobody (my will is too strong to be a heartless)

Spike rolled his eyes at Starlight’s comment, “There is a literal dragon sitting right next to you, we have as our queen in all but name a solar demigod, with her co-ruler being a lunar demigod, there is a demigod sitting three feet in front of you. There is a werewolf psychotherapist back in Magiville. You were able to travel through time like we normally travel through space and alter it. Seriously, you accept all that but the idea of spirits of the cold that are drawn to people fighting each other and freezing them to death to feed on them is utterly outrageous?” Spike asked rhetorically.

cold spike just cold

Intriguing choice not putting the rest of the Mane Six and using Flash as their substitute. It will be entertaining.

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You seem to miss the point if you think Spike is being cold.

Okay, this chapter was short. I don't know how I feel about it. It was just a bunch of build-up and exposition, not to mention a bit of fixing. I see Twilight isn't comfortable about being politically active. To be honest, I wouldn't be either, but what needs to be done needs to be done. "sigh"

Again, you did an excellent job on the chapter. Sorry I took a while to get around to posting the review. Nothing to blame except self-admitted laziness. Still, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were, of course, all quite well done. I particularly liked the explanation concerning the fact the Windigos didn't try anything during Sombra's reign, as well as the efforts to get as many of the civilians as possible to relative safety AND the reactions to the quick explanations .

So, yeah, I will very certainly be looking forward to more of this, but I also know and respect that you have a life outside the computer room.

Short chapter but full of things.

Nice genre savyness on Shining's part. That will speed up the things

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No... it's the shy ones that should scare you the most.

"YOU SHALL NOT PASS!!!"

Really? :ajbemused: You know, I'm impressed how that obvious reference didn't detract from the epicness of that fight. :ajsmug: So, is Flash going to show up more in later stories? :unsuresweetie:

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Really?:ajbemused:

:eeyup:

So, is Flash going to show up more in later stories?:unsuresweetie:

:raritywink:

All I can say is great job on the final chapter of this story. :-D The exchanges, action, characterizations and general wrap-up were all very well done. :-D

I absolutely loved the greater detail shown in Celestia and Luna's attempts to keep the Windigoes at bay as well as the added detail going into that spell needed to repair the Crystal Heart as well as the chat close to the end between Starlight and Sunburst AND what I guess to be an end cameo by Thorax .

I'll most assuredly be looking forward to more of your work, but will also respect the fact that you DO have a life outside the computer room that requires attention too.

Another piece of story completed and the introduction to another one!

Great job as always, man.

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