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Darth Link 22


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Commissioned by an anonymous reader.

After the trouble at Camp Everfree, the Rainbooms are hoping for some quiet time. However, one of Princess Twilight's potions has ended up in their world, and has been found by the worst possible trio.

Now the Rainbooms are going to have to put their newfound powers to the test against a big problem. A really, really big problem.

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“Check it out, guys, I found a secret in this game! You can actually pay money to get ahead! Now I can just spend money and beat the game quicker! Ha! I’m beating those game developers so good!”
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“Okay, maybe she’s a little dim, but...”

Zing!

“Ahh! Their teeth were made to bite hard things! It’s the most painful thing I have ever experienced!”

I don't know why, but the writing there made me think of a Family Guy quote I read on TV Tropes.

"Aaahhh! It's not a liquid! It's a great many pieces of solid matter, that form a hard floor-like surface! Aaahhh!"

... no... just... no.

Well, this was fun. Silly, bordering on nonsensical, but fun. I enjoyed it.

Hilarious. I never would have pictured Sonata being rich and business savvy or Aria being the levelheaded one. The whole thing was great, especially how the fighting caused problems for Cinch and the Flim Flam brothers, and Princess Twilight was too distracted by Flash to actually help once the fighting started.

Though I do wonder what Sonata has planned at the end there. Did she save some of that potion perhaps?

7911566 I think they're just calorie-loading.

Seriously Princess Twilight needs to move on.

Now this was some ridiculous Attack on Titan levels of fighting. Very funny and enjoyable to read.

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