Don't worry you can trust me, But don't say i didn't warn you.
A new villain appears in Equestria who wields magic powers of ice and snow, using said powers, he foalnaps princess Twilight, while in this new villains custody she finds that he doesn't seem all that villainous to twilight, just... Sad and lonely.
Please PM any errors about my writing so error correction comments don't fill the comment section but if you have feedback please feel free to comment down below.
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That is a interesting start.
Alright you got me hooked so far
Ice King...the most sympathetic and known character in adventure time.....*adds thumbs up button and tracking*
ZAP~~
Seems like it's gonna be a fun ride, looking forward to the rest of this. Also, the cover art is splendid.
PLease please include Simon in this!
so she develops Stockholm syndrome?
So far so good, can't wait for more
7904459 nope
7904630 hmm...
As someone who DOESN'T like Adventure time (Don't judge me, it just never took my interest.) I can say this is an awesome fic.
I love it!
7905362 fair enough.
Thanks for the vote of confidence.
Ah, the ice king, easily one of my favorite characters in the show. Interesting concept and the story looks promising. You had my interest but now you have my attention. I will admit that when i first read the title, I immediately thought of that really sad episode with him and Marceline (here comes the feels train), so i thought this would be way more emotional but i am really enjoying the comedy. Keep up the great work.
7904630 Make more chapters I need more!
8028735 Okay, don't hurt me... I will release one tonight.
8029379 Thanks for spotting that, this story I have to edit the grammar and eventually get around to rewording it all. I know I am not particularly good at grammar and spotting those little hiccups as well so it's always nice to have someone find one for me. This story in particular I write as it comes to mind and I speak and or think with odd wording as such it translates to this story as there is only me myself and I working in this particular fic.
Well at least I haven't got an ooc complaint and hopefully, I won't have to.
8029410 Yes, this isn't OoC. It actually isn't OoC.
I sent a PM detailing some errs I found in Chapter 3.
>logs in
>sees story title
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> Sees title
IN THE MOUNTAINS.
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8028983 Hurt you? no, I just really like new chapters that get rid of cliffhangers also this is a good story
Interesting start, ill keep reading this.
Simon!
Enjoying this story so far. Would love to read more.
8029489 you rang?
8029632 setting things up.
more
8033144
Alright thank you for the Help, I AM going to delete this comment as you ignored the fact that I said in the description to PM me any writing and or grammar errors as to not fill the comment section with error correcting, Once again I very much appreciate the time you took to point these out to me and I will correct them in the future.
I think this could use some editing for the grammar, flow, and other things that irked me slightly.
I'd love to help if you're willing.
8033553 While I am sorry that I missed the part where you asked for corrections to be sent via PM, I can't say I appreciate the way that you handled this afterwards. You gave a very polite response, removed my comment, and cited your reasons why while also saying that I am appreciated.
Quite frankly, I feel like you work in customer service, and I can't really say that is a compliment when I know that I was just brushed off.
This was the only one you corrected, and thank you for that.
8046591 you make me chuckle, i apologize if i offended you from this, i don't work in customer service per say, but I am in the IT business and i most definitely would never redirect a valued customer to an indefinite hold that constantly says "your call is important".
But in all seriousness, I am sorry it feels as if i brushed you off, i have no idea what to do to make you feel better, if you are curious as to why it took me a long time to rid the comments of other well needed constructive criticism it was that the comments themselves were quite small and went unnoticed.
8046876 Heh, sorry. I was a little pissy from work. I don't really know about the other comments, I just read that you were gonna do the corrections but deleted the list.
8047097 fair enough
Also, this should have the Crossover tag if that indeed is the Ice King from Adventure Time.
I bet he has wizard madness protection against luna dream magic I bet he zaps her good or throw her for a loop like a game!
When is the next update?
8463463
Funnily enough I've been working on it recently, as opposed to I am living lava. It will be out this month.
8463531
Cool
8463531
It's been more than a month, now what?
8556091
I am continuing work on it but uni took most of my time and along with the fact I wasn't in my 'writing' phase stalled the progress. Sorry about the false statement from before.
I'll see what I can get done.
8556164
Alright
I like this story, keep on going
8632847
I'm really happy you actually read my stories, I am enjoying your stories myself, as I have read all of them.
I'm also up to date as of this comment.
You know, that really is a good point.
Granted, Twilight is technically in the center of a kingdom, and right beside its capitol city besides, but even if we allow that nopony in Equestria desires to harm Twilight or the corresponding Element Bearers, the Everfree Forest is literally right beside the town and holds many mysteries and dangers besides, to, again, say nothing of the threat of diamond dogs or napping dragons. You'd think there would have been some mention of so much as a single guard post in the town of Ponyville, like, just even in a shot of some shack with guard/princess regalia on the side in the town in the show from an aerial shot or something.
Awesome chapter.
Ice King was pretty quick with that fanfic. Awaiting the next chapter and Happy New Years.
8642054
Happy New Year to you as well, unlike myself the Ice King is a super dedicated fan fiction writer who has nothing better to do. He is what I strive to be.
9384946
Wow, it has been a whole year! Happy new years to you too, again. Ice King is too pro for us, we just can't keep up with our fics.