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Shadow of doubt


Don't worry you can trust me, But don't say i didn't warn you.

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Broken, Weak, Shameful are the emotions Celestia felt at the time Nightmare moon returned with Sombra, tirek, and chrysalis. Using magic forbidden to even her parents, she summons help... with a price.

With Sombra's return, he was able to release tirek with a shaky alliance they traveled to the badlands and with chrysalis in toe they stormed canterlot, they were prepared this time, no nonsense.
They separated the elements of harmony they weren't able to stop them. And in my foolishness, I agreed to let luna hold them off whilst I prepared the failsafe teleport spell in order to teleport the surviving civilians to safety. What a fool I was, once the teleport went off luna was corrupted into nightmare moon once again by Sombra.

Now, I am alone in a failsafe room in the castle dungeons, my citizens spread far and wide, the elements of harmony missing I only have one choice left. I must summon Him.

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Comments ( 8 )

7849616 I don't get it, she's immortal, that means that he has to serve her for ever. Why would he want that?
Plus, is Celestia like 'immortal immortal'? Or just until she is killed by decapitation immortal.
Plot hole!!! ' how is this Guy's offer better than Celestia's, surely being a thousand years old she could have spotted the trap beneath the cheese.

I'm sane again

You'd be surprised how often I say that in normal conversation.

Interesting story you have going on. Looking forward to seeing how it pans out

This seems a bit rushed... But I still like it and I am looking forward to more.

Why was this cancelled?

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Partially because I want to rewrite it better, partially because I'm still in bloody university and it takes all my time. Although happy thoughts, this is my last year.

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