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When Arceus decided that he didn't like how things were going back home, he decided to move home all the Pokémon, as well as a few choice humans. Aromi was lucky enough to be one of those humans.

Unfortunately, when he awoke, he was all alone in Manehatten. His team is now missing, he is now an Umbreon, and he has no idea where to start looking for said team. Aromi isn't even sure what to do anymore.

At least one of these strange Ponyta-like things, someone named Coco Pommel, has been kind enough to give him a place to stay for the time being.

Side story to zeusdemigod131's story, A New World, A New Way.
Image is not my own.
A huge thanks to Raiku-Kawisa for becoming my editor.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

Where did you get the cover art?

Ya need an editor mate.

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Sourced.
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I always need an editor. Are you offering?

5291039 Sorry, have my own story that I am working on

Dam right this bandwagon will never die

Welcome to Equss.

(Sorry, don't have much to say, I do not mean it a bad way though!)

Looks like a nice story, keep it up!

Really looking towards the next chapter

Waiting for more, good job! I really do love pokemon/pony crossovers.

So far....I like this.

A different way of communicating that has absolutely no use for unicorns(take that you over used race!) that makes sense and is easily explained without going into over-explanatory detail.

And speaking of overly explained, your keeping the readers in the dark about the human, keeps it interesting. I hope he will not turn out to be some type of super-samaritin hero, but that all depends on how you write him. Though I do hope that you keep Coco directly involved in the plot itself, a few authors focus too much on the Poke-verse aspects compared to the MLP.

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Nice keep it up and good work mate

5291039 Umm.... Are you still using Coco Pommel?

5944293 Yes, sorry, I've just been really busy lately.

Well here I am reading this for the first time.

Darn you! I want more...

Update the story I command you to!!!!

I love it! :heart: Great work, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Why is this cancelled?

The cancelation of the story is the reason why 9/11 exists

So anyone going to fill me in on why the story is canceled or is it gust temporary

The story is alive!!!

Also good chapter in my opinion

The pacing is rushed - Coco seems surprisingly unsurprised by all of this - but I like the emphasis on body language.

At this point, it feels like Coco's role could be filled by any character. What does she do that could be useful to your story?

Why would a human-turned-Audino keep tripping? Their body shapes aren't THAT different.

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