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What happens when a human boy is cursed to be a dragon and comes to the land of Equestria? Read and find out...
The Crossover is with How To Train Your Dragon
Note: This was Fan Requested by Dragon Whisper 243 and the story idea was his, but the story was written by me
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It's kinda painful to read as it is very rough and rushed...
Grammar and spellings good as far as I can tell so that's a plus!
Although it has its good side's and it's bad you should find a way to spread out your important happenings.
Yeah definitely space shit out more.
I could have easily have spread him finding the human across three chapters in detail... The rush... Don't...just don't.
Very promising story. Really lokking forward to more of it.
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I'm sorry,
It's just that my style is this:
Write Story
Write more stories
Eventually after I've written every story come back to edit...
Then re-edit...
And again...
And some more...
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Well I figured that people already know the Equestria Girls movie, and if you don't then you shouldn't read this and of course the greatest sin an author can do is to tell the audience something they already know.
Erk... um... I know this is your idea, but perhaps you should try rewritting the chapters later on, maybe try to focus on typing more per chapter, 1000 or slightly more than.
7896125 I'am agree.
Too fast, no environement description or detailed actions. The story's core is .... arf... can be much more prepared also.
>>Cyb3rSamurai
Thank you for your comments.
Issues are being fixed.
This story needs more work to really come to life.
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I plan on editing it...
Eventually.
Okay question, where do the two stories connect one is hiccup going to kill the night fury and the other is a boy in a cave after becoming one?
This story has no continuity and the dragon rambles in run on sentences that have horrible grammar honestly it is like you are spewing your thoughts straight into the story.
One last thing before I give up on this story completely no REAL person would trust anyone that quickly.
Okay this is NOT A STORY!!! IT is the FRAMEWORK FOR A STORY MAINLY IT IS THE MAJOR FUCKING PLOT POINTS. I mean your comments are better written. You are CLEARLY ADHD or ADD and need to get some fucking medicine to fix that.
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Calm down!
And make it into ONE COMMENT, or else!
8071462 Ditto also this is damn near painful to read.
Gonna wait till it's edited to read
Wow the beginning was surprisingly depressing......... Can't wait to read more! :D lol
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I'm also confused with that what does Hiccup have to do with anything?
If Drago had his dragon skin cloak he would’ve survived.
It’s Starswirl isn’t it.
I new it.
Also...
Marriage and true love are also options
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wow nearly a year later and no new comments or an answer......
i'm surprised
Sounds like raising the sun is up for grabs, I’ll take it