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THAT'S A TWIST I WASN'T PREPARED FOR
OMFG what a twist! Holy shit thats awesome! :D
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OMG the first chapter was brilliant. :D I'll have to read the rest of what's up later. Looking forward to the rest.
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And I, for one, love incest kink stuff, so. Bring it on. You are one of the masters of Twishining, after all.
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A twist that can only be done in writing. Clever jerk.
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Damn, you got me again you literal genius
Yeah... it was kinda surprising and unexpected. Nice twist! I may assume that Celestia has planned to have an entire family of gifted unicorns under her wing but on a stage of Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle something went wrong)))
I totally saw it comming, Twilight sneaking around, kicking flank on bad ponies. Nope gotta be Velvet.
Also, what the heck. Mystical Bonsai my ass, I wish Bonsai were just shrubs that looked like trees. Bonsai is the art of shapeing a normal tree into a dwarf, a giant Bonsai is just a topiary. I guess in the magical land of Equestra Bonsai is a kind of shrub that grows really really slowly.
8619163 Yes. I'm aware. My editor pointed this out to me as well. But the symbolism is what's important. So I'm gonna just go ahead and file this under 'Fiction'.
Joker best villain
Nice
Yoooooo. Nice twist my dude. This'll be fun. And suddenly, the summary on the "front cover" makes a whole lotta sense.
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I know you said to relax, but seriously? I just wanna say "combine" one last time.
I gave you that last mention of refraction on a technicality I guess, but this should definitely be reflect. Light doesn't change angles when going through hair, and what's more, it definitely doesn't change colors when refracting through.
or any (??)
God damn it. Played like a damn fiddle.
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Inspired by this Cayde-6 moment?
And here, after that opening scene, I was thinking this was another AU chapter. But no, it's so much more than that. Well played, Shakespearicles!
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Holy $#@%& i thought it was sparkle till the very last feckin paragraph
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What... WHAT?! How did I fall for something like that!
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<<< The World's Strongest Writer™
Well done !
Hrm.
Well played, you magnificent son of a bitch!
*Gets to that last setencne and blinks* oh your good...
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You should see the kind of tree she has in the garden she shows for ponies she doesn't like
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That mf’in plot twist. You win. GOATED.
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Ah yes. The tree that makes one ALLERGIC TO SUNLIGHT.
It begins...
Wow was totally not expecting that.
Well that was a twist and a half.
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I did not see that twist coming. Well played good sir, well played.
Very nice start to the story, I'm very interested in discovering where this goes.
I'm already suspicious of Celestia being involved with Twilight being accosted in some way just so she would have a reason to introduce Night Light to her.
You got me
The bold on "Twilight Velvet" is completely unnecesary, and I don't like it. Celestia, for one, wouldn't emphasize the name in that situation, and it kinda comes across as beating the reader over the head with the twist. It wouldn't even be particularly subtle to not bold, it just wouldn't be the opposite of suble.
Typo: "And yet, date trees orchards exist" - date tree orchards, singular.
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Shakes, muh man!
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I've had this one on my Read Later shelf for a while, ever since you posted the thing with the tree a while back. And though Ponesexcest is ...
MUH JAM
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... I just didn't think it'd be something I'd want assigned to my Extremely Valuable Time®
SRSLY DUNT DEW DRUGZ KIDX
BUTT ...
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I forgot I was dealing with The World's Strongest Writer™ here, and some Unknown Force compelled me to read ...
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So... of course, I waited until I was at my Highly Skilled Job© ...
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... to take a nice, relaxing break to start this ...
MAGNIFICENT
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How could I have doubted ...
The Man™
The Legend™™
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SHAKESPERICLES®®®
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Holy Shit.. The end has blown my mind and let me tell you... That isn't that easy.
The story described what would come, yet this chapter opened the eyes of how truly a Goddess can make long term plans on a daily basis...
Shoot now I feel like I have to reread the story into Twilight Velvet’s voice.
I did not see that coming. The way the chapter ends I mean. I think I almost got whiplash from the sudden twist
I'm liking this story so far. There were a few times I wondered if something may have been some kind of innuendo, and I'm still not sure if I was just reading too much into it and seeing hidden meanings that weren't there.
I have a feeling that this story is going to irk the sh¡t out of me, but in a good way.... If that makes any sense.
Nice fake out
Time to re-reading this beauty. A masterpiece should be enjoyed more than once after all ♡
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